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11/21/2018 c1 Wow
Wow this sucks. Is English not your native tongue? Please just give up now, you’re a terrible writer.
7/8/2007 c1 14wormbuffet
English just isn't your forte, is it? I'm sorry, but it didn't make sense and I couldn't finish reading. Too much work. I'd give it a two out of ten. The two points are for effort.
6/4/2006 c2 10onlytomriddle
hm...english must not be your native tongue. are you from japan or something?
8/19/2005 c1 8Rahh Gumba Foo
I honestly didn't have enough motivation to read through your grammatical errors... =(
8/16/2005 c1 The Spider King
Mr.Kastle

I'm gonna go ahead and be as creul as I can , it's what I do. Grammer, spelliing,and most english skills need work however you do have a good idea.
8/12/2005 c2 acire0027
You have a good idea here, but your grammar and sentence structure could use a lot of work. You have too many choppy sentences and proper names and dates should be capitalized. Also you should consider some quotation marks,

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