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5/21/2006 c1 20cheeky doggie
I like this poem! Especially the way you ended each paragraph with - hunting. That must have been some thesaurus you used...0.0 but I especially love the way you ended it. 'For you I am hunting...' xD
11/9/2005 c1 1FluffyDragonboy
that's not true your creative enough
8/26/2005 c1 4checkprofile4newaccount
wow! You're such a poet! WEll, i want DNAngel to be mine too, but you can't always get what you want!

~ royal_rabbit (from neopets)
8/15/2005 c1 11KupoWrath
Yes, that is a poem. And a good one at that.

I like the repitition in the entire poem, and the emotion you managed to shove in there. Very nicely done I might add...

*clings to Krad* POOR KRADY-POO! I LOVE YOU! *runs away, dodging numerous attacks from TWO people with wings* AW! DARKY-CUDDLE-KINS IS JEALOUS! *hides behind a tree for it only to be a smoldering pile of nothingness... runs away for dear life*

~Kupo~
8/14/2005 c1 7Koway Oceshia
aw, that's really nice! krad keeps searching. i hope he finds dark. great poem! really really good!
8/13/2005 c1 Krystean Ray
That was trully beauitful! In my opinion you should be a poet! Great job!
8/12/2005 c1 19solysal
a great poem. the repetition did a great job providing emphasis.
8/12/2005 c1 11Misoka Mine
Wow, that was really cool. I love the way you kept the repition up. I never could have found that many ways to rhyme like that. Krad poems are few and far between- it's great to see one.
8/12/2005 c1 15negolataknofelet
nice poem I liked it

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