
4/25/2006 c2
56Old Fiat
Very good. Are you going to make is so mr kennedy does not die? Much better twist than those stupid tv writers... killing the best character... honestly, anyway. Update! I like reading your fiction. I love short chapters! they keep my attention so keep going like you are now and I'll be very very happy!
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Very good. Are you going to make is so mr kennedy does not die? Much better twist than those stupid tv writers... killing the best character... honestly, anyway. Update! I like reading your fiction. I love short chapters! they keep my attention so keep going like you are now and I'll be very very happy!
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11/3/2005 c2 goof
PLEASE UPDATE! There's a real shortage of GOOD hornblower fics out there and I think yours might be one of these. Please dont stop and never continue!
PLEASE UPDATE! There's a real shortage of GOOD hornblower fics out there and I think yours might be one of these. Please dont stop and never continue!
10/6/2005 c1
1childoftheorient
You used Tolkein! yay - u rock 4eva. did u write that poem or is it by someone else? its v.good. x

You used Tolkein! yay - u rock 4eva. did u write that poem or is it by someone else? its v.good. x
8/28/2005 c2
11Lozzie
a very good start. you write very well. i am intrigued as to where you will go with this.
i too am writing a story set after Retribution. It seems such an open ending to many things. We never see Archie's funeral or anything. It leaves things rather open to...interpretation shall we call it? Or in my case, take one throw away line from Retribution and twist the rest of the Hornblower Saga...great fun!

a very good start. you write very well. i am intrigued as to where you will go with this.
i too am writing a story set after Retribution. It seems such an open ending to many things. We never see Archie's funeral or anything. It leaves things rather open to...interpretation shall we call it? Or in my case, take one throw away line from Retribution and twist the rest of the Hornblower Saga...great fun!
8/28/2005 c2
5ellennar
Macs are evil! Since I just spent a month house sitting for my Dad who has nothing but mac's I can sympathize. Update when you can and keep up the good work!

Macs are evil! Since I just spent a month house sitting for my Dad who has nothing but mac's I can sympathize. Update when you can and keep up the good work!
8/27/2005 c2
9Apollo's Lady
Anyone who brings back Archie, is my kind of author. I will patiently await MORE!

Anyone who brings back Archie, is my kind of author. I will patiently await MORE!