for Professional Ninja Skills for Idiots7/31/2024 c13 Guest
I enjoyed your story and I didn’t find your AU on jutsu to be a plot hole. Which you explained within the context of your story. People suck and will complain. Dont let it bring you down. I look forward to reading any works you post in the future
I enjoyed your story and I didn’t find your AU on jutsu to be a plot hole. Which you explained within the context of your story. People suck and will complain. Dont let it bring you down. I look forward to reading any works you post in the future
7/15/2023 c13 
2addictedreader94
Hey, just wanted to say that I really liked reading your fanfic. Then I realized how it is almost old enough to go to college. It has really held up well. Sorry that people gave you trouble for changing stuff. They should have expected it to change what with it being a fanfic of Naruto.
2addictedreader94Hey, just wanted to say that I really liked reading your fanfic. Then I realized how it is almost old enough to go to college. It has really held up well. Sorry that people gave you trouble for changing stuff. They should have expected it to change what with it being a fanfic of Naruto.
11/11/2015 c13 just me78
Your story was pretty good! Especially for being only13. You could be a writer if you wanted to. I would have liked to see it be longer as well. But quality over quantity any day. Keep it up!
Your story was pretty good! Especially for being only13. You could be a writer if you wanted to. I would have liked to see it be longer as well. But quality over quantity any day. Keep it up!
10/16/2015 c6 Guest
KinesongPayaso
Stop hating. Personally I think he did pretty well no bashing (which believe it or not lots of fanfics do it especially Naruto fanfics) and still keeping most of the people in character personally I think Naruto's growth is a bit to rapid. Really I should'nt I think you stoped writng I really think it could have got better if you got some ideas from formulaic
KinesongPayaso
Stop hating. Personally I think he did pretty well no bashing (which believe it or not lots of fanfics do it especially Naruto fanfics) and still keeping most of the people in character personally I think Naruto's growth is a bit to rapid. Really I should'nt I think you stoped writng I really think it could have got better if you got some ideas from formulaic
10/16/2015 c5 Guest
I know Naruto is not realistic and has tons of potential I feel it would be better if Naruto got stronger through longer periods of time like I don't know 5 by the time he graduates hes not jounin level or high level chunin. It would be better if he ends up around Sasuke level towards the end of the academy (if your even going to write that much) and during the Sasuke retrivel (if that even happens) he's around jounin (personally I just don't like when Naruto gets to strong to fast infact I don't like any character getting strong to fast (unless their EXTREMELY weak in their world).
I know Naruto is not realistic and has tons of potential I feel it would be better if Naruto got stronger through longer periods of time like I don't know 5 by the time he graduates hes not jounin level or high level chunin. It would be better if he ends up around Sasuke level towards the end of the academy (if your even going to write that much) and during the Sasuke retrivel (if that even happens) he's around jounin (personally I just don't like when Naruto gets to strong to fast infact I don't like any character getting strong to fast (unless their EXTREMELY weak in their world).
10/15/2015 c1 Guest
story is pretty good I'm just hoping Naruto doesn't get overpowered
story is pretty good I'm just hoping Naruto doesn't get overpowered
6/27/2015 c4 Guest
A word
A word
7/13/2014 c1 kildar2010
Seems like a good story so far, i will read on and come back with a proper review then :)
Seems like a good story so far, i will read on and come back with a proper review then :)
4/17/2013 c13 1Anyanwu
I actually liked this bit of fanfiction. It wasn't polished and had some problems, but it had a nice plot device (the book) and a few interesting changes. I was pleased you didn't simply follow canon. I hope you pick this up again someday.
1AnyanwuI actually liked this bit of fanfiction. It wasn't polished and had some problems, but it had a nice plot device (the book) and a few interesting changes. I was pleased you didn't simply follow canon. I hope you pick this up again someday.
5/21/2011 c1 43dumplings3
It may be too late, but I vote Naruto x Sasuke.
Aweeesome story, btw. I love the premise, it's so humorous and it's so rewarding seeing Naruto gradually improve. Points for keeping him in character too, without a major personality overhaul or anything (a lot of fics do that =/ They turn him into Sasuke at his worst)
43dumplings3It may be too late, but I vote Naruto x Sasuke.
Aweeesome story, btw. I love the premise, it's so humorous and it's so rewarding seeing Naruto gradually improve. Points for keeping him in character too, without a major personality overhaul or anything (a lot of fics do that =/ They turn him into Sasuke at his worst)
3/3/2011 c13 3dumplings3
Noooooooooooooooooo! I loved this story. And the ridiculous insanity. It was somewhat cracky, but that was the good thing about it. Plot holes can be filled. NOOOOOOOOOO.
You'll never take it back up again? *sob* *Sob*
Noooooooooooooooooo! I loved this story. And the ridiculous insanity. It was somewhat cracky, but that was the good thing about it. Plot holes can be filled. NOOOOOOOOOO.
You'll never take it back up again? *sob* *Sob*
3/3/2011 c7 3dumplings3
Last chapter:
Best. Jutsu. Ever.
This chapter: Aww, was expecting more of an Anko gag.
Last chapter:
Best. Jutsu. Ever.
This chapter: Aww, was expecting more of an Anko gag.
3/3/2011 c6 3dumplings3
Oh yeah, love how (just like in canon) Naruto pulls genius stuff out of his arse.
Oh yeah, love how (just like in canon) Naruto pulls genius stuff out of his arse.