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8/19/2005 c1 iluvwater
I really liked it. It seemed to go through the events a little tot fast, but if u didnt do that i think i wouldve stopped reading. :) However in the future, dont try to rush your story. In this one, you went from hermoine being the "bushy- brown haired girl" and then she was "hermione" and THEN she became their friend. Dont try to think that you have to rush into the story. Develop your plot line, which is coming rather nicely, AND develop your characters.
8/16/2005 c2 iluvwater
i just wanted 2 write and tell u that that was awesome! i normally try 2 give sum constructive criticism but i got 2 involved in this story 2 noticed ne mistakes everyone was in charcter and i loved it!
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