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12/16/2016 c40 1TheWateringWizard
One thing I noticed over many fics, not just yours, is that you all tend to rely on the same techniques to convey emotions. People blush a lot (they could simply be embarrassed sometimes) and they tend to tear up or cry very easily. My heart isn't made of stone and I know that I need a LOT to cry. So when I read about how people begin weeping for seemingly small reasons, it gets me wondering. But maybe I'm wrong, maybe I just don't understand
12/16/2016 c39 TheWateringWizard
I had a little bit of trouble not cringing when Harry, Ginny and Rose were giving dating advises to Sirius in the previous chapter. I wonder what difference will it make for Harry that Voldemort is back a year early
12/16/2016 c38 TheWateringWizard
Sometimes in your fic, I still have a little problem when they or someone else say that they're DEEPLY in love with each other. They're kids, they wouldn't feel or think like that. Love each other, but a mad, deep love... nope
12/16/2016 c37 TheWateringWizard
What's amazing is seeing what incantation does the author of a fic invents for the Bat-Bogey Hex as JK never said it. Yours is pretty good !
12/16/2016 c33 TheWateringWizard
Now what's interesting is what will happen during fourth year
12/16/2016 c32 TheWateringWizard
What ?! Can Voldemort come back during the third year ? That would be weird
12/15/2016 c30 TheWateringWizard
The Harry-James dialogue was very good as I was super uncomfortable while reading it. I can also understand why Ron would be more quickly tolerant towards the Harry-Ginny relationship as they've known each other for such a long time and Ron knows that Harry is a good bloke
12/15/2016 c29 TheWateringWizard
Okay... I usually don't like waiting too long for relationships to develop. But the only problem I had with this scene is that saying "I love you" that quickly is a little cringy to me. Maybe I don't understand that they've known each other for a long time and that they've each had feelings for longer than they admit. Kissing okay but... I'm a little miffed
And it's pretty hypocritical from me to say that because if things were different I could've as easily been complaining about how the relationship wasn't moving quick enough
12/15/2016 c27 TheWateringWizard
And there you go ! My predictions were right ! Well it was nothing too complicated to guess anyway
12/15/2016 c26 TheWateringWizard
I don't understand the whole ordeal with the resorting ! It's basically like being sorted again. If Ti was sorted in Gryffindor the first time then he'll surely go there again. It's not like when resorting, the hat will suddenly go "Oh well let's change completely and put him in Slytherin. It's not like I sort students based on their personalities". He was deemed a Gryffindor than it's highly unlikely that it changed
12/15/2016 c25 TheWateringWizard
Your discussion last chapter between Sirius and Ti about Sirius not liking his family and fleeing to James'. I KNOW that the same thing will happen with Ti and I wouldn't be surprised if it's Sirius that "collects" him
12/15/2016 c23 TheWateringWizard
Wow that's a lot of babies ! One extra Malfoy, one extra Potter and an extra Granger !
12/15/2016 c21 TheWateringWizard
Wow that was a huge surprise !
12/15/2016 c20 TheWateringWizard
Ohhhh another baby ? Well that's great ! And I know what you're doing with H/G. I wasn't expecting a Soul Bond between them. What will be even more interesting is the justification to it
12/15/2016 c10 TheWateringWizard
I really love your Rose, Ginny and Neville ! But I was thinking about something. I know it has to do with Chapter 1 but when I read that Dumbledore captured the three Lestrange, it would mean that Neville has his parents. But it leaves me wondering what will happen to Crouch Jr ? Because he won't be sentenced to Azkaban. I guess I'll stick around and see during year 4
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