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2/7/2010 c1 2aRSeNRiGGS MHiNe
admit it girl...

if you like Nate for Elise...

uh... whatever...

but still beautiful...
12/29/2009 c1 tecna jessie
“I do not understand. What can this Nate possibly have that I don’t?”

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I really don't understand JP is jealous at Nate...

IMO Elise would better stick up with JP than watching his jealousy would almost kill Nate... and him...
12/28/2009 c1 tecna jessie
“Darling, you can’t afford me.” The diva in me sighed. You’re telling him that as much as you’re telling yourself; you’ll probably be single for the rest of your life.

I shook my head. Damn conscience. This is exactly the attitude my mother tells me keeps the men away. I’d call it my most endearing quality. But JP didn't care. I looked over at him and saw him examining his nails. The nerve of him!

“I'm Jean-Paul Arsenault,” he replied, slipping on his designer aviators. “I can afford anything.”

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if i were Elise...

I should be terrified for what he says...

I should panic...

good thing she was not like me...

she was so strong... still she can handle what JP says to her...
12/28/2009 c1 Janelle Liccumberri
Elise pulled JP closer, and hoped she wouldn’t wake up any time soon.

And the windows started to fog...

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nice ending, huh?

and it ends up with a... LOVE SCENE?

damn great glee!
12/10/2009 c1 tecna jessie
yo!

I LOVE it...

much better if you make some Elise/JP stories...

P.S...

NICE PAIRING!

They are my most fave loveteam...

more than Mac and Kaori...

More than Zoe and Moby...

more than Allegra and Psymon...

But overall...

They are the BEST!

AH
12/2/2007 c1 8-bit Jack
Well, not having had the experience of JP's character (other than having the cheat charrie on SSX 3) i can't say whether or not they are appropriate together, but i did like this fairly well. My only issue is elise seems a bit off to me. She's always seemed more the type to go after what she wants and ignore the rest, not play games. But she did have the perfect amount of "fuck you, i'm awesome" so for that i congratulate you. but then, i suppose of the SSXers have that, don' they?

Except nate. nate's a panda. *nods*
5/11/2007 c1 8Paekia
I liked this story, although it does suck that it twas only a dream *sigh* But I do agree with you that they are a good pairing. They seem to fit! They would have goregous, adorable children too! (With SEXY accents, I might add!)
8/3/2006 c1 4Insanity Strikes Thrice
That was probably one of the best one-shots I've read all year. It's funny in a very sophisticated way, and I like how you've gotten into Elise's head with the first-person narrative (I admire good first-person; I've tried writing it, and I just can't). I'd say update soon, but it's a one-shot, so it's over now. Keep writing!

P.S. Thanks for reviewing my story. I really appreciate it.
5/6/2006 c1 7Werewolf's One
Lol, this is good. I used to dig JP back in the first game, before they turned him into... Well, who ever heard of the French wearing plaid? Seriously. And I can so imagine this happening.
2/25/2006 c1 10MissPixel
Well, this is a pleasant surprise. I read this a long time ago and loved it, but was new at the time and hadn't worked out this whole 'reviewing' bit. I've got 'Haze' listed for a Best Fic Award on my profile, which, although it means nothing in the grand scheme of things, is at least some proof of my appreciation.

I still love every bit of it - the nice pacing, the smooth transition between the 'chitchat' and the 'steamy romance' bit that so often goes too fast and bumpy...

How nice to discover that one of my favorite reviewers is also one of my favorite writers!

Cheers,

Pix
11/27/2005 c1 SummaStorm
Wow...really nicely done. Ah heh, I've never thought about JP and Elise being together...but yes, they'd make a pretty great couple. Just Eddie, he doesn't really seem to match Elise in general. What a sudden ending, keep writing more! I'll be watching out for your SSX stories...:D
11/16/2005 c1 PrettyBlackDiamond2
HEY! thanx for ur advise! i love getting messages like that it helps me! ill make SURE that my other story isnt like that! but could you help me out with one this tho?

In my other stroy the main characters have known eachother for years and in the first chapter, the guy confesses his love for the girl, but she runs off not knowing what to think and the story is about her developing feelings for her and probably like at chapter 9 or 10 she falls in love with him and they become a couple. Do you think i rushed it when i made the guy confess his feelings for her in the first chapter?
8/28/2005 c1 1Jasic
hm, good...very very good. if i knew how to say it in french...i probably would! lol, ever think of writing moreone-shots? i think u should! anyways, pce, great job!
8/18/2005 c1 NA
oh nice!

i loved it very nice very in character too
8/17/2005 c1 Kachie Kitty
Good Job Glee! I kno that u replied to all of my chapters so i'm trying to do the same hopefully...

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