for Dance3/31/2007 c1 Steen
Amazing wordplay with rich descriptions! This is one of the best fanfictions I've read in quite a bit. I love it.
Nice foreplay as well, it really set the mood of the story.
I look foward to more.
Amazing wordplay with rich descriptions! This is one of the best fanfictions I've read in quite a bit. I love it.
Nice foreplay as well, it really set the mood of the story.
I look foward to more.
1/7/2007 c1 Keba-kun
Aw, that's so friggin hot. ::drool:: I love you for postimg this, and i like the fact the Ryo is sems, it's really hot. ~Ja ne~
Aw, that's so friggin hot. ::drool:: I love you for postimg this, and i like the fact the Ryo is sems, it's really hot. ~Ja ne~
9/17/2006 c1 bubblygrl2yahoo.com
i'm new at this so i don't really know how to review, but overal, nice job...*_-
i'm new at this so i don't really know how to review, but overal, nice job...*_-
8/2/2006 c1 sso100 im a girl
wow u got ryo doing tha lust work!geez i bet dee was sore in the morning hehe.ok see ya im going 2 read more of yur fake fanfics there really good.but the 1 i love is of angels and demons.;-)
wow u got ryo doing tha lust work!geez i bet dee was sore in the morning hehe.ok see ya im going 2 read more of yur fake fanfics there really good.but the 1 i love is of angels and demons.;-)
6/6/2006 c1 
2CheshireMiko
damn, I drooled. lol
I loved it, amazingly dirty and unbearably hawt.
your a great writer.
2CheshireMikodamn, I drooled. lol
I loved it, amazingly dirty and unbearably hawt.
your a great writer.
5/27/2006 c1 19haru's
That was great man. That was so sexy. And the ending was funny, I shought something was suspicious. hehe ^_^
19haru'sThat was great man. That was so sexy. And the ending was funny, I shought something was suspicious. hehe ^_^
2/23/2006 c1 Brittany
This piece is the f*in bomb! I love it, it is the most awesome damn fanfic I have ever read. I can hardley wait for the next one, ;-D. Love ya much bye. :-B
This piece is the f*in bomb! I love it, it is the most awesome damn fanfic I have ever read. I can hardley wait for the next one, ;-D. Love ya much bye. :-B
2/2/2006 c1 16Nariel
Oh, don't we all wish to be that chick in the elevator? ^_^
Holy Gods that was hot... *faints from overheating*
16NarielOh, don't we all wish to be that chick in the elevator? ^_^
Holy Gods that was hot... *faints from overheating*
11/13/2005 c1 AtKo
Very good I want more please?
Very good I want more please?
11/13/2005 c1 AtKo
Very good I want more please?
Very good I want more please?
11/3/2005 c1 8ColeridgeFan
Nice one kat! Hey, uh...Angels and Demons...so whats going on with that one?
8ColeridgeFanNice one kat! Hey, uh...Angels and Demons...so whats going on with that one?
9/26/2005 c1 mizukimarr910
hey you officially rule i loved this story it was intense and the dance scene was awesome and totally original i'vbe never read anytthing like thhat for this story. please keep writing and update again soon.
thanx mizukimarr910
hey you officially rule i loved this story it was intense and the dance scene was awesome and totally original i'vbe never read anytthing like thhat for this story. please keep writing and update again soon.
thanx mizukimarr910