
11/1/2005 c3
52Miss Queen B
I love the story.
I thought the first chapter had a lot of humor in it and I like that fact that you mention some of the sombies movies in it. The other chapters had those "oh my god, i can't believe that happen" events which is also cool.
Keep up the good work.
ps. I hate cliffhangers!

I love the story.
I thought the first chapter had a lot of humor in it and I like that fact that you mention some of the sombies movies in it. The other chapters had those "oh my god, i can't believe that happen" events which is also cool.
Keep up the good work.
ps. I hate cliffhangers!
10/31/2005 c1
2HectorVictorious
are these students all hardcore mafia drug dealers, or do they just keep illegal guns around for kicks?
unless they are already military or criminals, these characters ought to be alot more disturbed over the fact that they have to shoot all of these people they know and love

are these students all hardcore mafia drug dealers, or do they just keep illegal guns around for kicks?
unless they are already military or criminals, these characters ought to be alot more disturbed over the fact that they have to shoot all of these people they know and love