for I'm Here8/31/2005 c1 
118SlvrSoleAlchmst1
That was great. I thought it was absolutely hilarious how you called Athrun a "blunet". And I'm putting my favorite lines here because I feel like I just have to quote them. "What Yzak was hiding under the act of not giving a damn. Yzak was lost. He didn't know what to do." That was perfect, because you really hit the nail on the head and showed clearly why Yzak acts the way he does and what's really underneath that hard exterior. Nice job.
118SlvrSoleAlchmst1That was great. I thought it was absolutely hilarious how you called Athrun a "blunet". And I'm putting my favorite lines here because I feel like I just have to quote them. "What Yzak was hiding under the act of not giving a damn. Yzak was lost. He didn't know what to do." That was perfect, because you really hit the nail on the head and showed clearly why Yzak acts the way he does and what's really underneath that hard exterior. Nice job.
8/27/2005 c1 21yehudi13
ah I love your new word "blunett" *sniggers*...
I hate telling anyone this, because I can't say anything back to it... because I do it many times over too, but this is a tad littered with some spelling errors
it looks like you have their characters down really well, and the mention of Kira, such a great detail
...and the angstyness of it all, the last couple of sentences got me, excellent job
thanks so much for the review... *sweatdrop* I saw the mistake and fixed it as soon as possible except ff takes a while to actually show the fixness of it, and again, I'm so glad I read this, tis very good ^ ^
21yehudi13ah I love your new word "blunett" *sniggers*...
I hate telling anyone this, because I can't say anything back to it... because I do it many times over too, but this is a tad littered with some spelling errors
it looks like you have their characters down really well, and the mention of Kira, such a great detail
...and the angstyness of it all, the last couple of sentences got me, excellent job
thanks so much for the review... *sweatdrop* I saw the mistake and fixed it as soon as possible except ff takes a while to actually show the fixness of it, and again, I'm so glad I read this, tis very good ^ ^
8/26/2005 c1 Skweeshy
;; -misses Nicol-
Aha, yay, AsuYza! There were a few minor spelling mistakes, but it really wasn't bad at all. =O Definitely not 'shit' XD.
I liked it ^^. It was pretty good, and it was a realistic idea. =/ I find it hard to come up with plausible plot ideas for Athrun x Yzak, but you did well.
;; -misses Nicol-
Aha, yay, AsuYza! There were a few minor spelling mistakes, but it really wasn't bad at all. =O Definitely not 'shit' XD.
I liked it ^^. It was pretty good, and it was a realistic idea. =/ I find it hard to come up with plausible plot ideas for Athrun x Yzak, but you did well.
8/21/2005 c1 8KiraTatashi
BAsically, this fic is quite good, except for a few grammatical errors, which I don't blame you for since I too, make errors. But you should never call a workpiece, a piece of SHIT.
8KiraTatashiBAsically, this fic is quite good, except for a few grammatical errors, which I don't blame you for since I too, make errors. But you should never call a workpiece, a piece of SHIT.