for Choices6/17/2022 c7 irispapyrus
I like this story a lot but holy crap are Ryoga and Akane out of character. Like sooo out of character. To point you kinda morphed them both to genuinely evil characters which I don’t think was your intention.
I like this story a lot but holy crap are Ryoga and Akane out of character. Like sooo out of character. To point you kinda morphed them both to genuinely evil characters which I don’t think was your intention.
10/21/2020 c7 U
...W...T...F. Why is Akane getting so much showtime and being treated as a 'victim'!? Good lord...as for Ranma, is he a total masochist? The slightest word of "Oh, I only 'mostly' hate you!" from the girl and he quietly crawls back? Why is Ranma being torn into so much? He should stand up for himself and take a stand on his own two feet! Where is the resolve!? "Oh, he betrayed me by squeezing my wrist after I punched him in the face and grabbed him! He must be a monster, since he did that to a female!" Pfff...Double standards are really screwed up! As for the rape thing...eh... Anyway, well written story' but really am disliking the emotional-devestation plot-focus and the apparent railroading back to an abusive relationship with Akane. Ranma deserves better, but maybe I'm just a fan of happy endings...
That...is a really f'ed up situation for Ranma. Akane was a totally evil monster to him and 'he' is painted as the bad-guy by everyone. The girl is expected to punch him in the face and scream at him constantly, but if the guy raises his voice or forces her hand off him? Worst double-standard around and sadly seen in reality. Then Ranma is unknowingly 'RAPED' and Akane 'KNOWS' it and doesn't say a word, while STILL pretending Ranma is evil? Everyone at the school is taking her bull account as gospel? That heartless, vile, evil little monster! Why in the name of all that is holy, is Ranma so hung up on the girl?! Gah! I hope the next chapters go in a more positive direction for him. Akane deserves to BURN
...W...T...F. Why is Akane getting so much showtime and being treated as a 'victim'!? Good lord...as for Ranma, is he a total masochist? The slightest word of "Oh, I only 'mostly' hate you!" from the girl and he quietly crawls back? Why is Ranma being torn into so much? He should stand up for himself and take a stand on his own two feet! Where is the resolve!? "Oh, he betrayed me by squeezing my wrist after I punched him in the face and grabbed him! He must be a monster, since he did that to a female!" Pfff...Double standards are really screwed up! As for the rape thing...eh... Anyway, well written story' but really am disliking the emotional-devestation plot-focus and the apparent railroading back to an abusive relationship with Akane. Ranma deserves better, but maybe I'm just a fan of happy endings...
That...is a really f'ed up situation for Ranma. Akane was a totally evil monster to him and 'he' is painted as the bad-guy by everyone. The girl is expected to punch him in the face and scream at him constantly, but if the guy raises his voice or forces her hand off him? Worst double-standard around and sadly seen in reality. Then Ranma is unknowingly 'RAPED' and Akane 'KNOWS' it and doesn't say a word, while STILL pretending Ranma is evil? Everyone at the school is taking her bull account as gospel? That heartless, vile, evil little monster! Why in the name of all that is holy, is Ranma so hung up on the girl?! Gah! I hope the next chapters go in a more positive direction for him. Akane deserves to BURN
10/21/2020 c7 U
It's all Fucking shit ..no one give damn about ranna ,no one fucking care about ranna ,, it's all shit ... reading it's just frustrations, it's not worth reading it. It's all shit ..
It's all Fucking shit ..no one give damn about ranna ,no one fucking care about ranna ,, it's all shit ... reading it's just frustrations, it's not worth reading it. It's all shit ..
6/10/2019 c2 James423
I enjoyed the story a lot.
However it would've been better if you remained consistent and used female pronouns everytime Ranma was a girl.
I enjoyed the story a lot.
However it would've been better if you remained consistent and used female pronouns everytime Ranma was a girl.
9/25/2017 c7 
8Shyguy1
This is a good story. Well written. The best word I could use to describe it would be "intense".
I saw a review of it that described the characterization as "less and more" and I can't help but agree. I think, you've boiled these characters down. Cut away the detritus and come to the center of them.
I'm anxious to see the rest. You created such a life like patch work of characters and events that I find I am emotionally invested in the outcome. Despite it being fiction, i know that I will feel a profound sense of relief at least at getting closure.
To those who are thinking of reading this, be warned. It it's a fantastic work and must be read to the end to be fully understood. No half measures.
8Shyguy1This is a good story. Well written. The best word I could use to describe it would be "intense".
I saw a review of it that described the characterization as "less and more" and I can't help but agree. I think, you've boiled these characters down. Cut away the detritus and come to the center of them.
I'm anxious to see the rest. You created such a life like patch work of characters and events that I find I am emotionally invested in the outcome. Despite it being fiction, i know that I will feel a profound sense of relief at least at getting closure.
To those who are thinking of reading this, be warned. It it's a fantastic work and must be read to the end to be fully understood. No half measures.
9/19/2017 c4 Ro0w'z
A estas alturas de la historia ( me gustaron mucho los primeros capítulos) pues la historia es muy repetitiva, dices la misma información en varios párrafos con diferentes palabras, y a la larga es muy frustrante y Ranma cambia de opinión y vuelve a la original en todas estas cosas que describes que ea abrumador ... Tenia que decirlo
A estas alturas de la historia ( me gustaron mucho los primeros capítulos) pues la historia es muy repetitiva, dices la misma información en varios párrafos con diferentes palabras, y a la larga es muy frustrante y Ranma cambia de opinión y vuelve a la original en todas estas cosas que describes que ea abrumador ... Tenia que decirlo
7/21/2016 c2 tacaloking
i found this many years ago and this has been one of my favorite fanfictions ever since and i read hundreds of fanfiction for the series i reread this so many times i lost tract of how times i came back to this you suck a great job with emotions and giving detail and i really like that ranma has to piece together what happen i hope i do think that ranma keeping the baby would fit the story better but i seen to many good storys ruin because the writer was worried about pleasing there readers so i say decide for yourself on what you want to do because there a good chance either option might make the readers not happy so go your own path and let the fans decide for themselves if there happy or not i hope one day you will continue because if a story can be updated after being untouched since 2001 i can always hope one day you will come back and continue your story
i found this many years ago and this has been one of my favorite fanfictions ever since and i read hundreds of fanfiction for the series i reread this so many times i lost tract of how times i came back to this you suck a great job with emotions and giving detail and i really like that ranma has to piece together what happen i hope i do think that ranma keeping the baby would fit the story better but i seen to many good storys ruin because the writer was worried about pleasing there readers so i say decide for yourself on what you want to do because there a good chance either option might make the readers not happy so go your own path and let the fans decide for themselves if there happy or not i hope one day you will continue because if a story can be updated after being untouched since 2001 i can always hope one day you will come back and continue your story
7/17/2016 c1 Guest
So they have a fight.
They yell insults at each other and one thinks she can't win so resorts to physical violence.
When this is answered in kind it is apparently unforgivable.
Lording your strength over your spouse is not a good way to behave in a relationship.
But Ranma never did, even though Akane did.
You can argue that it did not really hurt Ranma when he was hit but in the same vein insulting doesn't hurt either.
Apparently it was wrong for Ranma to hit Ryuta during a fight because he's weaker.
But it is okay to hit someone stronger like Akane does Ranma?
A fight starts with words. Certain topics are a step too far.
These topics should be avoided unless you are prepared for vengeance, either physical or at a later date.
Generally if you are weaker you wait for a more opportune time, the stronger person will probably hit you.
Questioning Ranma's sexuality after dumping cold 'water' over him is a step too far.
So Ranma resorted to violence.
Calling Akane a bitch, or any other name (if your name is Ranma) then you probably get hit.
Is it that Akane doesn't want to be the weaker person in the relationship?
Is that all there is to it?
It seems like that...
Thank you for writing this.
So they have a fight.
They yell insults at each other and one thinks she can't win so resorts to physical violence.
When this is answered in kind it is apparently unforgivable.
Lording your strength over your spouse is not a good way to behave in a relationship.
But Ranma never did, even though Akane did.
You can argue that it did not really hurt Ranma when he was hit but in the same vein insulting doesn't hurt either.
Apparently it was wrong for Ranma to hit Ryuta during a fight because he's weaker.
But it is okay to hit someone stronger like Akane does Ranma?
A fight starts with words. Certain topics are a step too far.
These topics should be avoided unless you are prepared for vengeance, either physical or at a later date.
Generally if you are weaker you wait for a more opportune time, the stronger person will probably hit you.
Questioning Ranma's sexuality after dumping cold 'water' over him is a step too far.
So Ranma resorted to violence.
Calling Akane a bitch, or any other name (if your name is Ranma) then you probably get hit.
Is it that Akane doesn't want to be the weaker person in the relationship?
Is that all there is to it?
It seems like that...
Thank you for writing this.
11/1/2015 c7 3fireball900
Dammit, this was a brilliant piece of writing, and you even started the ending.
*WHY* did you have to abandon it?
9/10 for that.
... If you ever finish it I'll give you a 10/10 review!
3fireball900Dammit, this was a brilliant piece of writing, and you even started the ending.
*WHY* did you have to abandon it?
9/10 for that.
... If you ever finish it I'll give you a 10/10 review!
12/12/2014 c7 Guest
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