for Choices4/16/2001 c1 Mandrake
A great fic that is well written. Kinda dark but definitely worth the read. The dialogue between the characters is superb and everyone is in character. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
A great fic that is well written. Kinda dark but definitely worth the read. The dialogue between the characters is superb and everyone is in character. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
4/16/2001 c4 Lisa
Wooah. This is... just wooah. This is so deep and good and... I was crying and sympathising with the chatracters and... Wooah is all I can say. I really want to read it when you finsh this is great writing and I feel that you've taken a spin on ramna and akane that I haven't seen before. Keep up the good work!
Wooah. This is... just wooah. This is so deep and good and... I was crying and sympathising with the chatracters and... Wooah is all I can say. I really want to read it when you finsh this is great writing and I feel that you've taken a spin on ramna and akane that I haven't seen before. Keep up the good work!
4/15/2001 c1 An underpayed Critic
l can't tell if that last section was a drunken dream or half reality or real reality. Ya know those times where you can't seem to tell if its a dream or if its real? other than that good job
l can't tell if that last section was a drunken dream or half reality or real reality. Ya know those times where you can't seem to tell if its a dream or if its real? other than that good job