for Choices7/22/2013 c7 JCariveau
very good story... so wish i could read the rest. curious where the baby is while boy-type too, you know, wrong equipment and all... this sounds like a great bonding experiance for my favorite couple, and in my opinion Akane could say that she used instant boy-water... probably not work for what you have in mind... but it would keep the comments at school down, especially with Ranma-chan only a couple weeks along...
anyway, just really would love the rest of the story ;)
very good story... so wish i could read the rest. curious where the baby is while boy-type too, you know, wrong equipment and all... this sounds like a great bonding experiance for my favorite couple, and in my opinion Akane could say that she used instant boy-water... probably not work for what you have in mind... but it would keep the comments at school down, especially with Ranma-chan only a couple weeks along...
anyway, just really would love the rest of the story ;)
3/22/2013 c7 
19Nemrut
This is a rather well written story and really interesting but it is also extremely unpleasant at the same time. Depressing, heavy and really mean-spirited to such a degree that there is really no joy that comes from reading it and that is fine, some stories are like that and one can tell that this effect was what you were aiming for.
Of all the stuff that has happened here, I do think Ryouga's characterisation suffered a bit, because I think he would have reacted differently. Angrier, more raw, but also with guilt. Guilt for essentially striking a pregnant person and endangering the life of a child. but I would also expect him to beat Ranma up really hard after hearing what had happened, for the same reason as you had in your story. So, weirdly, I think he reacted less and more at the same time.
As to the abortion stuff now, that is always a heavy topic and people have different opinions on the matter and I am uncertain whether that can be discussed adequately in a story like this, since there are only personal steps one can take and no real solution. Everyone should have the right to decide, of course, but whether they do or not really is not an answer of right or wrong but rather a personal decision.
In that regard, I am interested to see how this turns up, Ranma leaving the school was one of the more intense scenes I have recently read and I do believe that Ranma was well within his rights to start beating people up, and make things much worse with that.
As to the pregnancy, not going to argue what makes sense or not seeing that this is Ranma after all, but I always figured that turning male would kill the baby, since there are no female body parts when he is a male, thus noplace for the baby to be. Then again, makes as much sense as everything else, just a personal preference.
But yeah, good work but while I will eagerly await an update, doubt I will ever reread this story unless a really melancholy mood takes me. Thank you for sharing this.
19NemrutThis is a rather well written story and really interesting but it is also extremely unpleasant at the same time. Depressing, heavy and really mean-spirited to such a degree that there is really no joy that comes from reading it and that is fine, some stories are like that and one can tell that this effect was what you were aiming for.
Of all the stuff that has happened here, I do think Ryouga's characterisation suffered a bit, because I think he would have reacted differently. Angrier, more raw, but also with guilt. Guilt for essentially striking a pregnant person and endangering the life of a child. but I would also expect him to beat Ranma up really hard after hearing what had happened, for the same reason as you had in your story. So, weirdly, I think he reacted less and more at the same time.
As to the abortion stuff now, that is always a heavy topic and people have different opinions on the matter and I am uncertain whether that can be discussed adequately in a story like this, since there are only personal steps one can take and no real solution. Everyone should have the right to decide, of course, but whether they do or not really is not an answer of right or wrong but rather a personal decision.
In that regard, I am interested to see how this turns up, Ranma leaving the school was one of the more intense scenes I have recently read and I do believe that Ranma was well within his rights to start beating people up, and make things much worse with that.
As to the pregnancy, not going to argue what makes sense or not seeing that this is Ranma after all, but I always figured that turning male would kill the baby, since there are no female body parts when he is a male, thus noplace for the baby to be. Then again, makes as much sense as everything else, just a personal preference.
But yeah, good work but while I will eagerly await an update, doubt I will ever reread this story unless a really melancholy mood takes me. Thank you for sharing this.
11/27/2012 c3 1Zhor
...W...T...F. Why is Akane getting so much showtime and being treated as a 'victim'!? Good lord...as for Ranma, is he a total masochist? The slightest word of "Oh, I only 'mostly' hate you!" from the girl and he quietly crawls back? Why is Ranma being torn into so much? He should stand up for himself and take a stand on his own two feet! Where is the resolve!? "Oh, he betrayed me by squeezing my wrist after I punched him in the face and grabbed him! He must be a monster, since he did that to a female!" Pfff...Double standards are really screwed up! As for the rape thing...eh... Anyway, well written story' but really am disliking the emotional-devestation plot-focus and the apparent railroading back to an abusive relationship with Akane. Ranma deserves better, but maybe I'm just a fan of happy endings...
1Zhor...W...T...F. Why is Akane getting so much showtime and being treated as a 'victim'!? Good lord...as for Ranma, is he a total masochist? The slightest word of "Oh, I only 'mostly' hate you!" from the girl and he quietly crawls back? Why is Ranma being torn into so much? He should stand up for himself and take a stand on his own two feet! Where is the resolve!? "Oh, he betrayed me by squeezing my wrist after I punched him in the face and grabbed him! He must be a monster, since he did that to a female!" Pfff...Double standards are really screwed up! As for the rape thing...eh... Anyway, well written story' but really am disliking the emotional-devestation plot-focus and the apparent railroading back to an abusive relationship with Akane. Ranma deserves better, but maybe I'm just a fan of happy endings...
11/26/2012 c2 Zhor
That...is a really f'ed up situation for Ranma. Akane was a totally evil monster to him and 'he' is painted as the bad-guy by everyone. The girl is expected to punch him in the face and scream at him constantly, but if the guy raises his voice or forces her hand off him? Worst double-standard around and sadly seen in reality. Then Ranma is unknowingly 'RAPED' and Akane 'KNOWS' it and doesn't say a word, while STILL pretending Ranma is evil? Everyone at the school is taking her bull account as gospel? That heartless, vile, evil little monster! Why in the name of all that is holy, is Ranma so hung up on the girl?! Gah! I hope the next chapters go in a more positive direction for him. Akane deserves to BURN.
That...is a really f'ed up situation for Ranma. Akane was a totally evil monster to him and 'he' is painted as the bad-guy by everyone. The girl is expected to punch him in the face and scream at him constantly, but if the guy raises his voice or forces her hand off him? Worst double-standard around and sadly seen in reality. Then Ranma is unknowingly 'RAPED' and Akane 'KNOWS' it and doesn't say a word, while STILL pretending Ranma is evil? Everyone at the school is taking her bull account as gospel? That heartless, vile, evil little monster! Why in the name of all that is holy, is Ranma so hung up on the girl?! Gah! I hope the next chapters go in a more positive direction for him. Akane deserves to BURN.
10/30/2012 c6 10JohnStang
Will you please give me a link to your website that has your fanfiction posted. You gave a like to your blog but not to the site itself which is different.
10JohnStangWill you please give me a link to your website that has your fanfiction posted. You gave a like to your blog but not to the site itself which is different.
10/30/2012 c7 JohnStang
Geez this was and is an excellent story. I wish you would finish it though. Since Kuno is becoming sane is there a possibility she/he will end up with him?
Geez this was and is an excellent story. I wish you would finish it though. Since Kuno is becoming sane is there a possibility she/he will end up with him?
12/20/2011 c1 tacaloking
this is my second favorite story the only thing that annoys me about this story it takes a hole damn day to read one chapter but its worth the read
this is my second favorite story the only thing that annoys me about this story it takes a hole damn day to read one chapter but its worth the read
7/26/2011 c7 KannaxChii
I really wish you'd continue with this but after all these years, you probably aren't planning on it. Well, this was a brilliantly written fic, and I'm sad to see it over.
Thanks for writing
I really wish you'd continue with this but after all these years, you probably aren't planning on it. Well, this was a brilliantly written fic, and I'm sad to see it over.
Thanks for writing
4/25/2011 c7 linkgold64
love the fic finally every one get a small taste of what ranma can do if you push him too far, come on every one even ranma has a breaking point,when they just say ENOUGHT and start to push back, no matter how good, noble or kind hearted they are, i really hope you keep writing ist a brilliant fic and i espetially liked the "talk" betwen ranma and akane, it was what we all wantet to hear from ranma.( for those of us who think he puts up with wayyyy to much, with out snaping)
love the fic finally every one get a small taste of what ranma can do if you push him too far, come on every one even ranma has a breaking point,when they just say ENOUGHT and start to push back, no matter how good, noble or kind hearted they are, i really hope you keep writing ist a brilliant fic and i espetially liked the "talk" betwen ranma and akane, it was what we all wantet to hear from ranma.( for those of us who think he puts up with wayyyy to much, with out snaping)
4/2/2011 c7 aki
I'm really proud of Akane here, I hope whatever you had planned, the ending will happily see them off on a road to recovery. Ranma's right that it wasn't Akane's fault. But with this terrible reminder of what kind of horrible things can happen just from stupid words and a quick temper, It's hard to imagine her slipping back into the abusive routine. I feel really sorry that Ranma is so averse to pity, often the word is pretty spat out, and is associated with simultaneous dissociation with the victimized party. But Akane clearly cares about Ranma. Her pity is an expression of concern and grief, not contempt or belittlement.
I'm really proud of Akane here, I hope whatever you had planned, the ending will happily see them off on a road to recovery. Ranma's right that it wasn't Akane's fault. But with this terrible reminder of what kind of horrible things can happen just from stupid words and a quick temper, It's hard to imagine her slipping back into the abusive routine. I feel really sorry that Ranma is so averse to pity, often the word is pretty spat out, and is associated with simultaneous dissociation with the victimized party. But Akane clearly cares about Ranma. Her pity is an expression of concern and grief, not contempt or belittlement.
12/19/2010 c1 16eddog2323
helpful hints.
Break the lines between normal words and Characters talking. and also between characters as well. it is hard to read. see if you can tell the difference.
#1 it was a sunny day, Ranma and Akane were walking to the marketplace. when Ranma got splash. "I realy hate this cusre!" Ranma yelled. "Ranma no baka!" akane yelled. "Why does this always happen to me?" Ranma asked.
#2 It was a sunny day, Ranma and Akane were walking to the marketplace. when Ranma got splash.
"I realy hate this cusre!" Ranma yelled.
"Ranma no baka!" Akane yelled.
"Why does this always happen to me? Ranma asked.
doesn't number two flow a lot better then number one. I like these stories but this writing is bad takes away 95% of the story. I made that mistake but once there were breaks where it was needed I got More hits then before.
16eddog2323helpful hints.
Break the lines between normal words and Characters talking. and also between characters as well. it is hard to read. see if you can tell the difference.
#1 it was a sunny day, Ranma and Akane were walking to the marketplace. when Ranma got splash. "I realy hate this cusre!" Ranma yelled. "Ranma no baka!" akane yelled. "Why does this always happen to me?" Ranma asked.
#2 It was a sunny day, Ranma and Akane were walking to the marketplace. when Ranma got splash.
"I realy hate this cusre!" Ranma yelled.
"Ranma no baka!" Akane yelled.
"Why does this always happen to me? Ranma asked.
doesn't number two flow a lot better then number one. I like these stories but this writing is bad takes away 95% of the story. I made that mistake but once there were breaks where it was needed I got More hits then before.
7/22/2010 c7 7Riniko22
Really an interesting story, I hope that you come back to complete it at some point.
7Riniko22Really an interesting story, I hope that you come back to complete it at some point.
4/21/2010 c7 tacaloking
please make more chapters
please make more chapters
4/9/2010 c7 GNesnios685
Just a little guess of my own, but was it Daisuke?
From Ranma's perspective at the party, we hear "God, I'm so sorry Ranma" just before they penetrate her, so we know it's someone who knows him/her, as well as the fact that he keeps calling Ranma a her when he's talking with Hiroshi later, and his lack of care over her disappearance could be a cover for relief that it looks like he/she won't be coming back.
Just my thoughts, I'd love to know if I'm right or wrong, give me an answer if you would please.
Just a little guess of my own, but was it Daisuke?
From Ranma's perspective at the party, we hear "God, I'm so sorry Ranma" just before they penetrate her, so we know it's someone who knows him/her, as well as the fact that he keeps calling Ranma a her when he's talking with Hiroshi later, and his lack of care over her disappearance could be a cover for relief that it looks like he/she won't be coming back.
Just my thoughts, I'd love to know if I'm right or wrong, give me an answer if you would please.
10/19/2009 c7 2hueloovoo
This story has torn at me every time I've started reading it. I always say I judge art by the level of emotion it stirs in me, and by that measurement, this story is a masterpiece beyond most I have ever experienced. I cry, I rage, I hurt and for the first time, being able to read chapters that were previously unavailable, I hope. I will wait years more if I must, for the rest of it, for the resolution, for what closure can be found.
I hope that Ranma finds out who raped him, and can confront him for some closure of his own. It's such a tenuous thing, closure, yet so important.
I have so many things to say about this story but most of them kinda get all mixed up when I try, so I'll finish with this: this story needs to be finished, whether it takes days or years. In the meantime I will wait.
2hueloovooThis story has torn at me every time I've started reading it. I always say I judge art by the level of emotion it stirs in me, and by that measurement, this story is a masterpiece beyond most I have ever experienced. I cry, I rage, I hurt and for the first time, being able to read chapters that were previously unavailable, I hope. I will wait years more if I must, for the rest of it, for the resolution, for what closure can be found.
I hope that Ranma finds out who raped him, and can confront him for some closure of his own. It's such a tenuous thing, closure, yet so important.
I have so many things to say about this story but most of them kinda get all mixed up when I try, so I'll finish with this: this story needs to be finished, whether it takes days or years. In the meantime I will wait.