for Roaring Silent Sea10/5/2005 c3 Katie
I absolutely love this story! You are a very talented writer, and I haven't read anything this good in a very long time. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read what happens next!
I absolutely love this story! You are a very talented writer, and I haven't read anything this good in a very long time. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read what happens next!
9/19/2005 c3 sillytigerlily
You have a gift of descriptive! Every scene is like a painting. I can't wait to read more. Don't keep us waiting too long! Kudos! -srh
You have a gift of descriptive! Every scene is like a painting. I can't wait to read more. Don't keep us waiting too long! Kudos! -srh
9/17/2005 c3 
5Violet Spark
I can't wait to see where this is headed! You've done a very good job of making Hattie anything but a Mary-Sue... they're generally quite a bit more likeable than she is. :) I mean this in the best sense, of course. Imperfect characters are my favorites. Can't wait until you bring Peter into it. I'd write more, but it's time for din-din, so... hasta luego!
~Vi Spark
5Violet SparkI can't wait to see where this is headed! You've done a very good job of making Hattie anything but a Mary-Sue... they're generally quite a bit more likeable than she is. :) I mean this in the best sense, of course. Imperfect characters are my favorites. Can't wait until you bring Peter into it. I'd write more, but it's time for din-din, so... hasta luego!
~Vi Spark
9/7/2005 c1 sillytigerlily
Well done! You write very well indeed! The only criticism I have is that the Missus/Mister thing gets distracting after a while. I would suggest abbreviating to Mrs./Mr. Other than that, I'm loving it! And into the Favorites it goes! -stl (sarah)
Well done! You write very well indeed! The only criticism I have is that the Missus/Mister thing gets distracting after a while. I would suggest abbreviating to Mrs./Mr. Other than that, I'm loving it! And into the Favorites it goes! -stl (sarah)
9/4/2005 c2 7MovieLover06
I loved this story. I simply can't wait for it to be updated! I must say that your writing is so descriptive, long and detailed. The way it is with my writing is that I seem to write quickly and can't seem to find words to fill in events. You do so perfectly, and because of this I am more tempted to read more. I hope that ou continue writing the same way you do now, I realize that from your writing, my writing is just not good enough. And so your method of writing had inspired me to find a way to write better, and that's the truth. I hope you update soon and keep writing!
7MovieLover06I loved this story. I simply can't wait for it to be updated! I must say that your writing is so descriptive, long and detailed. The way it is with my writing is that I seem to write quickly and can't seem to find words to fill in events. You do so perfectly, and because of this I am more tempted to read more. I hope that ou continue writing the same way you do now, I realize that from your writing, my writing is just not good enough. And so your method of writing had inspired me to find a way to write better, and that's the truth. I hope you update soon and keep writing!
9/4/2005 c2 Lady-Cherry-4lyf
I just read the second chap...it was so sad :'(..I cant believe she doesnt want anything 2 do with him anymore..please update soon..this story is brilliant and very well written keep it up :D take care luv Cherry XBLESSx
I just read the second chap...it was so sad :'(..I cant believe she doesnt want anything 2 do with him anymore..please update soon..this story is brilliant and very well written keep it up :D take care luv Cherry XBLESSx
9/2/2005 c1 Lady-Cherry-4lyf
OMG this story is so gd...I luv how it shows tht they've been friends be4 romance its soo sweet lol
please update soon ...take care luv cherry XBLESSX
OMG this story is so gd...I luv how it shows tht they've been friends be4 romance its soo sweet lol
please update soon ...take care luv cherry XBLESSX
8/23/2005 c1 Lucy
This really is spectacularly done. Please continue v. soon!
This really is spectacularly done. Please continue v. soon!