for Holiday Under The Sun7/14/2006 c1 
20BlackMorale
it was so funny! esp. the part when tomo and ashitare came. i wanna read yer other fics!
20BlackMoraleit was so funny! esp. the part when tomo and ashitare came. i wanna read yer other fics!
4/18/2006 c1 1lidool anime gurl
lolz... this fic was really funny! but, u cld of added in a bit more detail...lolz ^^
but i think u shld mayb write a sequel...? .. about it. i found around 2-3 mistakes but no problems...
keep it up!
1lidool anime gurllolz... this fic was really funny! but, u cld of added in a bit more detail...lolz ^^
but i think u shld mayb write a sequel...? .. about it. i found around 2-3 mistakes but no problems...
keep it up!
9/27/2005 c1 FyiXXX
Urrm... not bad i guess but... i don't get it! In the olden days, do they have ice-cream?Beaches? And bikinis?
Oh well... maybe i missed out something.. Nice story anyway.
Urrm... not bad i guess but... i don't get it! In the olden days, do they have ice-cream?Beaches? And bikinis?
Oh well... maybe i missed out something.. Nice story anyway.
9/22/2005 c1 1Chibi.x.Love
hi! i am just here to tell you that your story is one of the few that i have chosen to be in a newsletter that i am making right now. i am the vice president of the grade six computer club at my school and i am just asking permission if i can tell readers about your story?
1Chibi.x.Lovehi! i am just here to tell you that your story is one of the few that i have chosen to be in a newsletter that i am making right now. i am the vice president of the grade six computer club at my school and i am just asking permission if i can tell readers about your story?
9/10/2005 c1 4BlackRhythm.Paradise.Angel
Hello again,Akira! you know who am I right. You're story is intresting, can't wait for the next episode.
4BlackRhythm.Paradise.AngelHello again,Akira! you know who am I right. You're story is intresting, can't wait for the next episode.
9/7/2005 c1 11angelcharme
Hey, Akira! I loved your story( I think). As you know, I'm not an anime fan. Not much anyway. But keep up the good work. Although I never read it. Good luck!
11angelcharmeHey, Akira! I loved your story( I think). As you know, I'm not an anime fan. Not much anyway. But keep up the good work. Although I never read it. Good luck!