3/1/2007 c4 Minadalrive
Finally, some captain jack! LOVE...

x

Mina

3/1/2007 c1 Minadalrive
Pretty! But Isabelle's father is such a pain in the ass! I hope when Jack comes, he'll kill him... I hope some romantic stuff comes...

x

Mina

10/15/2006 c1 1ScarletsKisses
great story, plz r&r mine, only just started, tips would be well recieved

luv Scarlet

xoxox

9/4/2006 c44 2EmiliosLoofah
*At the 'wrap' party...the 'End of the FanFic' party at Spago Restaruant, Southern California*

Me: *At the microphone* My beloved Kate...this was truly one of the best fan fics I have ever read. I'm sorry to see it end-

Emilio: SKYNYRD! *holding up a glass of beer*

Me: Would you shut up for a sec? We aren't at Karaoke! I'm trying to-

Emilio: WOO HOO! You go girl...Kate-Yeah! You kick ass!

Me: OMG...*looking helplessly at Kate*

Kate: *laughing with Johnny*

Okay...last review...*sniffs*

All good thing must come to an end...this was a great fan fic...you've done very well! I have to apologize for this late R&R, but better late than never, eh? Saavy? LOL!

"The boy sounded exactly like his father, Jack Sparrow, and Jack could be seen hiding behind the lad’s dark black eyes. William even drawled and slurred like his father. He was completely Sparrow." Completely Sparrow...I like that!

"William furrowed his brow, watching as the shiny tip of a sword appeared out of the man’s stomach, shining with the fresh red blood of the enemy. And then the captain’s body fell sideways, limp and lifeless." Holy shit! Good one there!

“We’re still on the boat, Katherine!” Ha Ha ha!

"He was, of course, spawn of Jack Sparrow, master of deception and lies, seduction and luck, but most importantly, getting himself in too deep to pull himself out." This made me smile.

"His eyes traveled to the low ceiling and the things that hung from it in glass jars or boxes or on strings, tied tightly together. Things that were familiar and then there were new things. Like a glass jar of different colored eyes, and then a whole string of sharks teeth hung not too far away from his face, and his lip curled in minor disgust. Katherine looked sternly at him, reminding him slightly of their mother, and he stepped in, pushing the shark’s teeth out of his way as he moved deeper into the crowded house." I really liked how you put that in there!

"She had the Sparrow gift of deceit and wording things so no one else in the world but another Sparrow would know the meaning. She was strong and powerful, she was a witch doctor, a soothsayer, and a pirate at heart. She was only 20, and yet she was the smartest person William had even known." OMG-YES!

"It was a reunion for the Sparrows and for William and Elliot. The two had not seen each other in near 2 years, William believing the only child of Elizabeth and Will Turner was dead. Briar and Jack hadn’t seen each other in 6 months and Katherine had told William she was angrier than a mutinied Jack Sparrow."

This part I liked-

Emilio: Would you finish the review already?

Me: Shut up! This is the last review! *sniffs* what WILL I do without my Kate?

Emilio: Shop?

Me: Oh, Yeah!

Emilio: Oh, shit! *smacking his forehead and jiding the credit cards at the same time*

"The Black Pearl was William’s ship now, Jack had given it to him before he died and William had been the happiest man in the world that day. And a week later, its former captain was dead, Isabelle shortly after him. They were buried under their favorite tree on the island, together. Instead of a headstone, a sparrow, flying proudly over the waves with the sun to its back was carved in the bark of the great tree."

Me: Are you crying?

Emilio: No! *wiping tears from his eyes* Shit, I guess I'm gonna miss this too!

"The Sparrows were taught that everyday was a gift, and that they shouldn’t let the sunset on tomorrow before the sun rises on today. Although their lives were different, they had a few things in common, they loved their parents, they loved each other, and they loved every minute of life itself." Damn, you're making ME cry now!

"They were devious, mischievous, liars, cheats, thieves, shameless, powerful, selfless, threatening, intimidating, and beautiful. But above all that, they were Sparrows, and they made sure everyone knew them, their father, their mother, Will, and Elizabeth. And they made sure their enemies knew what they were dealing with. They were Jack and Isabelle’s blood, after all." OMG-you ended this story so perfect!

Johnny: You did very well, my darling!

Kate: Thanks! *kisses Johnny*

Emilio: Lemon! Yeah! YEE-HAW!

Me: OMG...no more beer for you!

Kate, I enjoyed reading this story! You've got a great gift...you write so frickin' well! Keep it up! Love ya...and here's my quote:

"A fool and his (or her!) money are soon partying!"

Ha ha ha ha ha ha!

Love You!

Beth :)

8/22/2006 c44 3Ella Raven
oh.my.god.

that was amazing.

sequel please, please, please please?

loved it.. the whole thing. i can't wait to read your work in the future!

yours,

-ella.

8/21/2006 c8 5captjackspeanut
*tears* That was such a good story and the last chapter made me cry...I miss them all already!

7/14/2006 c43 404accountdeleted404
I really enjoyed your story! I hope to see more of your work!