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11Quis Custodiet
"Motoko Urashima is a total babe!" - hahah I couldn't agree more. Really enjoying this story it's quite in character and reads just like an episode of the anime series.
11Quis Custodiet"Motoko Urashima is a total babe!" - hahah I couldn't agree more. Really enjoying this story it's quite in character and reads just like an episode of the anime series.
6/30/2014 c15 7Frosty Wolf
Very nice, I recently reread the dears manga and wanted to see what fanfiction I could find for it. Well done!
7Frosty WolfVery nice, I recently reread the dears manga and wanted to see what fanfiction I could find for it. Well done!
12/3/2013 c8 your biggest fan
Yo i love these and i am not done reading every page yet BUT i will be soon i see theres only fithteen i wish there were more.
If i would be possible to make more i would appreciate it
thank you
your biggest fan
Yo i love these and i am not done reading every page yet BUT i will be soon i see theres only fithteen i wish there were more.
If i would be possible to make more i would appreciate it
thank you
your biggest fan
10/8/2013 c15 great read
Please reread and correct many errors in dictation. Every page had out of place words that were miss dictated.
I really enjoyed this story so I did not stop and select words to be replaced.
Please reread and correct many errors in dictation. Every page had out of place words that were miss dictated.
I really enjoyed this story so I did not stop and select words to be replaced.
10/7/2013 c15 great read
I started 2 am to 8. thanks a lot. your the best dears fanfic author.
I started 2 am to 8. thanks a lot. your the best dears fanfic author.
10/7/2013 c13 Odin
Dude you are the best! I love every bit of your stories.
Dude you are the best! I love every bit of your stories.
5/24/2013 c1 AnAncientBard
I'm just placeing this review here to tell you that this is the very first fanfiction I remember reading, this story got me using this and has (albiet indirectly) helped to give me countless hours of enjoyment over the past five or so years.
Thank you.
I'm just placeing this review here to tell you that this is the very first fanfiction I remember reading, this story got me using this and has (albiet indirectly) helped to give me countless hours of enjoyment over the past five or so years.
Thank you.
10/30/2012 c15 Guest
please make a sequel!
please make a sequel!
10/15/2012 c8 Animelover2711
Well I just saw the anime recently (havent read the manga yet) and I came here to read its fanfiction.I was sorely disapointed with the small your story wa by the far the best in this section.I really love how it has went so far.
Well I just saw the anime recently (havent read the manga yet) and I came here to read its fanfiction.I was sorely disapointed with the small your story wa by the far the best in this section.I really love how it has went so far.
7/9/2012 c15 Officer Hotpants
I KNEW your name was familiar! Took the "Love Hina" reference at the very end for it to click, though. I really should have picked up on it with the Motoko Urashima reference at the beginning (I se- er, SAW what you did there). Man, you've written 3 of my favorite 5 fics, now. Think this one is about... #3. Would've been #2 were it just a little longer, but I'm not complainin'. Well, maybe I AM, but it's in a GOOD way. I mean, no-one wants to read MORE of a story they HATE, right?
You did a wonderful job of capturing and building upon the characters' personalities. Granted you made Ren's speech a bit simpler than it's been since her first 2 or 3 days with Takeya sometimes, but other than that it was pretty much a flawless capture. I DID notice teach' wasn't popping up with her usual frequency, though. She finally get a boyfriend? Or girlfriend? ... .. or perhaps a few of both? Honestly, I was absolutely expecting to see her pop up (and then out) in one of the anti-DearS crowds, mistaking it for a gang-bang or something. Or even popping up in the middle of sex, just seemingly teleported into the room. I would absolutely have taken it for canon if you'd had her monitoring a massive terminal in a secret underground hideout, waiting for a sign that something was going on in the Ikuhara household.
Somehow I knew Takeya would end up playing a big part in Human-DearS relations, though I didn't expect the "Master of the DearS!" ending. I figured it would be more of a "state-approved Master" system, using him as a model. Although I guess it's *sort of* that...
Good to see at least one author had both the ability and the incentive to write up a fic that does this wonderful series justice. Thank you for that. This series is the reason "Ah! Megami-sama" and "Love Hina" are no longer vying for top spot on my list, and it's almost depressing to see how people have seemingly either forgotton or completely missed it.
I KNEW your name was familiar! Took the "Love Hina" reference at the very end for it to click, though. I really should have picked up on it with the Motoko Urashima reference at the beginning (I se- er, SAW what you did there). Man, you've written 3 of my favorite 5 fics, now. Think this one is about... #3. Would've been #2 were it just a little longer, but I'm not complainin'. Well, maybe I AM, but it's in a GOOD way. I mean, no-one wants to read MORE of a story they HATE, right?
You did a wonderful job of capturing and building upon the characters' personalities. Granted you made Ren's speech a bit simpler than it's been since her first 2 or 3 days with Takeya sometimes, but other than that it was pretty much a flawless capture. I DID notice teach' wasn't popping up with her usual frequency, though. She finally get a boyfriend? Or girlfriend? ... .. or perhaps a few of both? Honestly, I was absolutely expecting to see her pop up (and then out) in one of the anti-DearS crowds, mistaking it for a gang-bang or something. Or even popping up in the middle of sex, just seemingly teleported into the room. I would absolutely have taken it for canon if you'd had her monitoring a massive terminal in a secret underground hideout, waiting for a sign that something was going on in the Ikuhara household.
Somehow I knew Takeya would end up playing a big part in Human-DearS relations, though I didn't expect the "Master of the DearS!" ending. I figured it would be more of a "state-approved Master" system, using him as a model. Although I guess it's *sort of* that...
Good to see at least one author had both the ability and the incentive to write up a fic that does this wonderful series justice. Thank you for that. This series is the reason "Ah! Megami-sama" and "Love Hina" are no longer vying for top spot on my list, and it's almost depressing to see how people have seemingly either forgotton or completely missed it.
2/29/2012 c15 ullietal
Amazing story, it's a shame it had to end and there isn't many dears fics available. Maybe one day you'll write a sequel? Well we can hope cant we.
Amazing story, it's a shame it had to end and there isn't many dears fics available. Maybe one day you'll write a sequel? Well we can hope cant we.
10/26/2011 c15 63Rose Unspindle
I liked the story, and the ending was awesome.
However, there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors, which made parts of it difficult to follow.
63Rose UnspindleI liked the story, and the ending was awesome.
However, there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors, which made parts of it difficult to follow.
9/17/2011 c10 DearSFaN4life
This was indeed a truly remarkable story that you yourself should be extremely proud of and should without a doubt create a sequel.I was mistified by by your way of helping the reader envision what is going on and..he.he I must say that I did in my own mind see EVERYTHING that happened including the sex scenes as much as I hate to admit but with someone giving explict details like that, well its almost impossible not to see what happens and with each time you discribed a character that was in the anime series I was able to see all of their features the character was naked or had a big gash on his/her head so with this review I humbly say that you have completely outdone any story that ive read and ever belived to be good... simply amazing that I want to read it again and I will do so until i feel as though I cant hold my eyes open any longer. simply beautiful 100/10 I wish i could say more
This was indeed a truly remarkable story that you yourself should be extremely proud of and should without a doubt create a sequel.I was mistified by by your way of helping the reader envision what is going on and..he.he I must say that I did in my own mind see EVERYTHING that happened including the sex scenes as much as I hate to admit but with someone giving explict details like that, well its almost impossible not to see what happens and with each time you discribed a character that was in the anime series I was able to see all of their features the character was naked or had a big gash on his/her head so with this review I humbly say that you have completely outdone any story that ive read and ever belived to be good... simply amazing that I want to read it again and I will do so until i feel as though I cant hold my eyes open any longer. simply beautiful 100/10 I wish i could say more
2/17/2010 c15 chris bounds
hello i am a newly made big fan of DearS because i only first saw it starting last week but still the anime is cool and your story makes a very good addition/ end to the trobles and strange relationship problems, but two things one) why did you do so little of Nia she just so cute and innocent not to show more offten, and two) why did it have to take to last min to wake up Fina she shold have came out sooner to stop the evil B*H and C**T name Ruby. still awsome story and only stories like as much was the ones that end in Nii by swaswj because of the more sex, most of focus was on Nia's and Natsuki's new relationship and was just funny to read mainly because just how good way dumb/innocent/and nieve she is. if you and swaswj ever make a DearS story together expecially if useing ideas from this story and his "Nii" ones then i would be one of you two's top supporters and fans.
hello i am a newly made big fan of DearS because i only first saw it starting last week but still the anime is cool and your story makes a very good addition/ end to the trobles and strange relationship problems, but two things one) why did you do so little of Nia she just so cute and innocent not to show more offten, and two) why did it have to take to last min to wake up Fina she shold have came out sooner to stop the evil B*H and C**T name Ruby. still awsome story and only stories like as much was the ones that end in Nii by swaswj because of the more sex, most of focus was on Nia's and Natsuki's new relationship and was just funny to read mainly because just how good way dumb/innocent/and nieve she is. if you and swaswj ever make a DearS story together expecially if useing ideas from this story and his "Nii" ones then i would be one of you two's top supporters and fans.