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8/30/2005 c1 Dogsbody
It's a lovely tale.Let me guess, that was Lindsey?
8/30/2005 c1 4eanpp74
This was really good. It would have been improved by correct punctuation and spelling, but it was really good.
8/30/2005 c1 1Fulton31
very good for your first. great idea, good exicution. over all a bit chopy, but well thought out. if this is a one shot, i am sad to see it end. if you go on i want to know who this is! keep writing, we all get better with each story we write, you have major potential so keep going!
8/29/2005 c1 IluvDanBen33
that was really sweet1 :D
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