for Saiyuki to Hogwarts1/14/2008 c6 
68ry0kiku
Dear God, I know I'm reviewing so damn late, but can you PLZ continue this?
I wanna know what will happen next! I wanna know what Gyokumen and Homura's up to! Onegai!
~r&k
P.S: Good luck with your next chaps! Keep it up!
68ry0kikuDear God, I know I'm reviewing so damn late, but can you PLZ continue this?
I wanna know what will happen next! I wanna know what Gyokumen and Homura's up to! Onegai!
~r&k
P.S: Good luck with your next chaps! Keep it up!
10/29/2005 c6 4tantei39kunoichi
hey can you update more chapters? this fanfic is cool! like it so much that i'm laughin on the floor! please update more kay? Hopin to read more of your chapters and stories! Go you!` ^_^
4tantei39kunoichihey can you update more chapters? this fanfic is cool! like it so much that i'm laughin on the floor! please update more kay? Hopin to read more of your chapters and stories! Go you!` ^_^
10/16/2005 c6 19Honeydew92
cool story... i will read on ^-^ ya know they would present their last name before first because that is the custom in japan, and i blieve that they whould automaticly say it like that...
19Honeydew92cool story... i will read on ^-^ ya know they would present their last name before first because that is the custom in japan, and i blieve that they whould automaticly say it like that...
10/12/2005 c1 Honeydew92
ah good plot, but if you could, please include a jap. guide for those who are always reading the english version and have not seen much of the anime - mainly me... ya i am trying to learn jap. but it is hard T_T
ah good plot, but if you could, please include a jap. guide for those who are always reading the english version and have not seen much of the anime - mainly me... ya i am trying to learn jap. but it is hard T_T
10/11/2005 c6 11fluffystwin
NOT THE FOOD! OMFG! this is so hilarious! thank you for updating! please update quicker! Ja Ne!
11fluffystwinNOT THE FOOD! OMFG! this is so hilarious! thank you for updating! please update quicker! Ja Ne!
10/11/2005 c6 8LilyGinnyBlack
Hello! :D I find the concept of a HP/Saiyuki crossover extremely interesting and your story has good potential. Though, there are a few things that I want to point out to make your story better than it already is.
First off, the story is much too heavy in dialogue and lacks any form of detail to give the readers a sense of setting, mental images, and ect. Secondly, try to make your chapters longer, it may take longer to update, but you please your readers, and even yourself, when you do this. Finally, try to use less Japanese words or write at the end of the chapter a glossary of sorts for the Japanese words. While I had no trouble with them, there are people who are not that familiar with the Japanese language, and thus, this effects both their enjoyment and understanding of the dialouge and/or events in the fic itself.
Please, don't take this review in the wrong way, I only wish to help you with your writing. :) I hope that you take my advice and put it to good use. I can't wait for the next chapter, good job and good luck. :D
~Lily~
8LilyGinnyBlackHello! :D I find the concept of a HP/Saiyuki crossover extremely interesting and your story has good potential. Though, there are a few things that I want to point out to make your story better than it already is.
First off, the story is much too heavy in dialogue and lacks any form of detail to give the readers a sense of setting, mental images, and ect. Secondly, try to make your chapters longer, it may take longer to update, but you please your readers, and even yourself, when you do this. Finally, try to use less Japanese words or write at the end of the chapter a glossary of sorts for the Japanese words. While I had no trouble with them, there are people who are not that familiar with the Japanese language, and thus, this effects both their enjoyment and understanding of the dialouge and/or events in the fic itself.
Please, don't take this review in the wrong way, I only wish to help you with your writing. :) I hope that you take my advice and put it to good use. I can't wait for the next chapter, good job and good luck. :D
~Lily~
9/19/2005 c5 11fluffystwin
THAT WAS HILARIOUS! could you maybe put some definitions at the bottom. i don't understand some japanese words. i love how you kept Gojyo and Goku in character. this is so fucking hilarious! please update. Ja ne!
11fluffystwinTHAT WAS HILARIOUS! could you maybe put some definitions at the bottom. i don't understand some japanese words. i love how you kept Gojyo and Goku in character. this is so fucking hilarious! please update. Ja ne!
9/18/2005 c5 Cyra Hakkai
I love this story! It makes me laugh! It fits in perfectly with book 5!
I love this story! It makes me laugh! It fits in perfectly with book 5!
9/12/2005 c1 forlorn miss
yeah right! are you also a harry potter fan? if yes, well we're just the same...
yeah right! are you also a harry potter fan? if yes, well we're just the same...
9/7/2005 c4 kia
omg god this is so good.very suspenseful and humerous at the same time. please update soon. dont leave this story hangin like all the others that i have read,please! update soon!
omg god this is so good.very suspenseful and humerous at the same time. please update soon. dont leave this story hangin like all the others that i have read,please! update soon!
9/4/2005 c4 Dark Lord
HEY! THIS STORY IS GETTING MORE INTERESTING! I hope you will continue to update with a faster speed. But if you are busy then take your time. I will continue reading this story..^^
HEY! THIS STORY IS GETTING MORE INTERESTING! I hope you will continue to update with a faster speed. But if you are busy then take your time. I will continue reading this story..^^
9/3/2005 c4 satan reencarnated into a card
*sniffsniff* goku, what happened? goku me favorite T_T
plz continue with promises of goku's safty
*sniffsniff* goku, what happened? goku me favorite T_T
plz continue with promises of goku's safty