for Too late?2/18/2006 c1 JayD
one word: BEAUTIFUL
one word: BEAUTIFUL
10/1/2005 c1 
8Jaigagne
That was a good one-shot ^^ loved the different ideas that you used instead of some of the same storylines
8JaigagneThat was a good one-shot ^^ loved the different ideas that you used instead of some of the same storylines
9/29/2005 c1 tom
What a brilliant idea...
the way Lorelai meets this stranger at the airport...telling him the whole story...simple brilliant !
It`s a pity that this is a one-shot story, cause i would really like it if you would continue, or if you would rewrite it, and make it last 200 chapters, but i`m looking forward to your sequel to "it doesn`t make any sense" too !
Love your work, every story is the highlight of my day ...
KEEP WRITING !
Looks your name proofs you right, you are a genius ;-)
What a brilliant idea...
the way Lorelai meets this stranger at the airport...telling him the whole story...simple brilliant !
It`s a pity that this is a one-shot story, cause i would really like it if you would continue, or if you would rewrite it, and make it last 200 chapters, but i`m looking forward to your sequel to "it doesn`t make any sense" too !
Love your work, every story is the highlight of my day ...
KEEP WRITING !
Looks your name proofs you right, you are a genius ;-)
9/10/2005 c1 erynnbeth
At first I was mad at you that you had Luke say no, but I kept reading and I really liked the way things ended up. If he says no on the show they had better do something like this, or I will be quite sad! Anyways, good job, I liked the story, and enjoy your trip!
At first I was mad at you that you had Luke say no, but I kept reading and I really liked the way things ended up. If he says no on the show they had better do something like this, or I will be quite sad! Anyways, good job, I liked the story, and enjoy your trip!
9/3/2005 c1 liz
That has got to be the most adorable story ever! I'm saving that in a Word Doc. right now! Awesome Job! :D
That has got to be the most adorable story ever! I'm saving that in a Word Doc. right now! Awesome Job! :D
9/1/2005 c1 roxton7
Hey Prof,
I enjoyed this story, I liked the way you had Luke explain his reason for not saying yes. If he says no I hope it is for the reason you state.
I'm anxiously awaiting the new season. Keep up the good writing. Luke & Lorelai of course, I am not a Rory/boyfriend fan. Too much of them.
Hey Prof,
I enjoyed this story, I liked the way you had Luke explain his reason for not saying yes. If he says no I hope it is for the reason you state.
I'm anxiously awaiting the new season. Keep up the good writing. Luke & Lorelai of course, I am not a Rory/boyfriend fan. Too much of them.
9/1/2005 c1 2writergirl487
WOW! I love this. Even though it probably wouldn't happen it is still amazing. I added it to my favorites list. Oh and right now I'm gonna ask you to right another chapter, don't you hate it when you write a single chapter fic and people keep asking for more. Sure it's flattering but come on, read THE END, or One Chapter only. Duh! I am bored. Bye! Oh I got your review!
2writergirl487WOW! I love this. Even though it probably wouldn't happen it is still amazing. I added it to my favorites list. Oh and right now I'm gonna ask you to right another chapter, don't you hate it when you write a single chapter fic and people keep asking for more. Sure it's flattering but come on, read THE END, or One Chapter only. Duh! I am bored. Bye! Oh I got your review!
8/31/2005 c1 J.Stone
Overall, an outstanding story. Very well written.
Just one point. When Lorelai had come back to Luke's apartment, these lines seemed a little awkward to me.
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"I love you too Luke.” She smiled.
“Good, now let’s get some sleep. Where’s your suitcase. Do you have any clothes?"
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It just felt to me that after they had been through so much, more dialog was needed. I know its a little thing, but this story is so near being perfect, that I thought I would just toss it out there.
Thanks Prof. Well done.
Overall, an outstanding story. Very well written.
Just one point. When Lorelai had come back to Luke's apartment, these lines seemed a little awkward to me.
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"I love you too Luke.” She smiled.
“Good, now let’s get some sleep. Where’s your suitcase. Do you have any clothes?"
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It just felt to me that after they had been through so much, more dialog was needed. I know its a little thing, but this story is so near being perfect, that I thought I would just toss it out there.
Thanks Prof. Well done.
8/31/2005 c1 orangesherbert7
awesome but long. im glad it was long but my dad was yelling at me. nyways i have to get off bc like i said my dad was yelling at me. so awesome.bye
awesome but long. im glad it was long but my dad was yelling at me. nyways i have to get off bc like i said my dad was yelling at me. so awesome.bye
8/31/2005 c1 12Gilmoregrl519
This is Really really really really really really really Good! Keep writing more Javajunkie stories!
12Gilmoregrl519This is Really really really really really really really Good! Keep writing more Javajunkie stories!
8/31/2005 c1 135daviderl31
Really good! I wasn't sure if she was going to go or stay. Good points about the bad events surrounding becoming engaged.
135daviderl31Really good! I wasn't sure if she was going to go or stay. Good points about the bad events surrounding becoming engaged.