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4/24/2006 c7 1lidool anime gurl
ong!... but i really think tat u shld mention about aya's real past more. and about Suzuno

either way the story is gettin really interesting! ^^ ja-ne
4/24/2006 c6 lidool anime gurl
wow...i hab so many questions...

1. where's tooya and yuuhi?

2.wat was tat star fing tat tooya had tat revived aya?

3. are they gonna be in a car crash!

guess i'll find out wen i read the other chpters

i havn't had much time lately... i hab so much hw, i don't get much time to read any more...

o well... either way i hope u continue with the story!
4/18/2006 c5 lidool anime gurl
omg... not related to Aki...but Aki is hot!lolz ^^

but it was a good tun over.

hm... i can't really tell whether it was as interesting as the other chapters, but keep it up! ^^
4/18/2006 c4 lidool anime gurl
um...i think it's spelt 'haragamo' or something like tat...ima pretty sure^^. da chapter is interesting and story is getting interesting as well^^... u could of gone into a bit more details but, either way its really good.^^
4/18/2006 c3 lidool anime gurl
this chapter was really interesting...but i think u cld of made it longer or put more details into it, overall i really liked it and can't wait to read the nxt chapter! ^^
4/18/2006 c2 lidool anime gurl
wow...freaky, lolz. aniwaiz i really like this chapter and i'll continue reading, i just havn't been havin da time to read and review at da moment :( but i'll try and read as soon as possible!

keep up with da good work i really like the story! ^^
4/11/2006 c1 lidool anime gurl
i know who it is! its touya! i know i'm right. i really like your story! ayashi no ceres is the best anime tat i've ever watched... and i've watched a lot! there are a few mispelled words in the story but you can esily make out the words of the story... there isn't anything else wrong with it so yeah ^^... so i hope u continue writin ghte story cause i look forward to reading it!
4/5/2006 c7 viiruz
Not updating for a long time? *sigh* You've dissapointed me...and now here I thought an update will be coming soon...*sigh heavily*

Lolz. I sigh to much don't I? :D

ForbiddenHeartz
4/5/2006 c6 viiruz
Sup? Its me remember? :D Haven't been updating cause my com crashed for a few months! TT.TT But now Im back to read and review.

Anywais...back to the point of reviewing...I loved your bonus dialogue! Yuuhi is such a dork...(a good dorkish way. XD)

ForbiddenHeartz
3/10/2006 c1 Sayuri Kurata
Great story pal! Keep up the good work! And by the way, when are you gonna show up on MSN? It's gonna drive me nuts without some1 2 talk 2...not 2 mention i'm usually gettin bored talkin 2 Ingrid's complaints...Dun tell her i said that...pls? Ok, bb
2/20/2006 c7 Yaoi.Loving.Jew
YAY! Good story. I sure hope aya gets better. write soon!
1/1/2006 c6 12 OVERLY obsessed
Great story! i can't wait till you put up the next chapter. i hope you upcate soon!
12/31/2005 c4 2 OVERLY obsessed
its spelt HAGOROMO, i think
11/24/2005 c6 shinguki
Ah... It's me, gunz again. Sorry about the previous review. I think I was on crazy.

Anyway, update soon and please don't make Tooya leave!

P.S Did you change your name?
11/21/2005 c6 4BlackRhythm.Paradise.Angel
Hey! luv your story. i feel likewhen we were in school Stella, u and me had a better friendship then know. i feel like we have drifted far away.

Sorry for the grammatical error.
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