for Held Loosely6/24/2009 c14 TwoStepsFromEden
yay! you are one of the most talented fan fiction writers in like...forever! i've read all 41 chapters more then 5 times and i still love it! i wish you'd still have writin more after Samsara...so if that little thing called imagination sparks again please write another tmm fic...^^
yay! you are one of the most talented fan fiction writers in like...forever! i've read all 41 chapters more then 5 times and i still love it! i wish you'd still have writin more after Samsara...so if that little thing called imagination sparks again please write another tmm fic...^^
7/30/2008 c1 victoria
i read all held loosely chapters last year and i've finally found it again!XD you're 2 stories are awsome! you should do write another series.XP
i read all held loosely chapters last year and i've finally found it again!XD you're 2 stories are awsome! you should do write another series.XP
8/22/2006 c41 
2Shiru23454
Yah...I waited until now to review cause...umm...all my others...fell through random holes in roads...and stuff...yeah. _
But they did exist. No doubt about it. It is in no way possible that my laziness compelled me to wait until the very end to just write a single review on the whole story. Poppycock and such. Yeah.
2Shiru23454Yah...I waited until now to review cause...umm...all my others...fell through random holes in roads...and stuff...yeah. _
But they did exist. No doubt about it. It is in no way possible that my laziness compelled me to wait until the very end to just write a single review on the whole story. Poppycock and such. Yeah.
7/9/2006 c41 9Mew-Sahara
THIS LAST CHAPPIE ROCKS MY SOCKS! YEAH! I love all the characters. You make them so funny. I'd love to have one of those weird oh-crap-Kish-got-stuck-in-the-oven days. :P I LOVE YOUR STORY AND CAN'T WAIT FOR A SEQUAL!
9Mew-SaharaTHIS LAST CHAPPIE ROCKS MY SOCKS! YEAH! I love all the characters. You make them so funny. I'd love to have one of those weird oh-crap-Kish-got-stuck-in-the-oven days. :P I LOVE YOUR STORY AND CAN'T WAIT FOR A SEQUAL!
7/9/2006 c39 Mew-Sahara
RONNY certainly seems fun to tease. Kish and Ryou certainly are the best done original chacters in this story. By original I means from the old TMM. Good job.
RONNY certainly seems fun to tease. Kish and Ryou certainly are the best done original chacters in this story. By original I means from the old TMM. Good job.
7/6/2006 c35 Mew-Sahara
The joys of playing with waffle irons. Such joys. Kiyoshi is MAD! That's bad.
The joys of playing with waffle irons. Such joys. Kiyoshi is MAD! That's bad.
7/6/2006 c34 Mew-Sahara
That is unconrtolably sick. But one good thing. RYOU X LETTUCE! RYOU X LETTUCE! YEAH!
That is unconrtolably sick. But one good thing. RYOU X LETTUCE! RYOU X LETTUCE! YEAH!
7/6/2006 c33 Mew-Sahara
Nothing I would change. Dude. I checked the reviews and I cover a but more then 2 pages. Crap. She didn't put up much of a fight. That's very good.
Nothing I would change. Dude. I checked the reviews and I cover a but more then 2 pages. Crap. She didn't put up much of a fight. That's very good.
7/6/2006 c32 Mew-Sahara
OH! Dance time. Shopping does wear you out. Even though I like never shop... :P
OH! Dance time. Shopping does wear you out. Even though I like never shop... :P