for Life has no real destiny1/30/2006 c1 
39Never Surrender
woohoo! another inu/sango fic (glomps you) you gave me an idea for my next fic! (glomps once more then dissapears)
39Never Surrenderwoohoo! another inu/sango fic (glomps you) you gave me an idea for my next fic! (glomps once more then dissapears)
12/30/2005 c1 1aya223
A lot of the reviews you already have gotten have made really good points, like how the plot is interesting and the grammar a bit shaky, but I have a surprise soft spot for Kouga, I discovered, as I read about him getting annihilated by Inu :P I hope you update.
1aya223A lot of the reviews you already have gotten have made really good points, like how the plot is interesting and the grammar a bit shaky, but I have a surprise soft spot for Kouga, I discovered, as I read about him getting annihilated by Inu :P I hope you update.
11/9/2005 c1 Kryztal-Ray
You have a very good plot going for you, and the story is going at a very nice pace. However, I did want to point out, be careful with grammar and how you make the characters talk. The first line Inuyasha said bothered me a bit, because yes he’s a potty-mouth, as the term is used, but I don’t think he’d say something like that. Other then that, you’re doing a very good job, and I hope to see a continuation of your first fic! Good job! n.n
You have a very good plot going for you, and the story is going at a very nice pace. However, I did want to point out, be careful with grammar and how you make the characters talk. The first line Inuyasha said bothered me a bit, because yes he’s a potty-mouth, as the term is used, but I don’t think he’d say something like that. Other then that, you’re doing a very good job, and I hope to see a continuation of your first fic! Good job! n.n
11/6/2005 c1 3animeroxz
I love it update soon and thanks for reviewing my story I'll update as soon as I can okay
3animeroxzI love it update soon and thanks for reviewing my story I'll update as soon as I can okay
9/24/2005 c1 1darth.chicken
that was a good chapter i cant wait to see what is going to happen next please update soon
1darth.chickenthat was a good chapter i cant wait to see what is going to happen next please update soon
9/16/2005 c1 3FayOrdella
This sounds like a really interesting story. Will you make another chapter?, I really liked it! Update soon!
3FayOrdellaThis sounds like a really interesting story. Will you make another chapter?, I really liked it! Update soon!
9/15/2005 c1 11Reza Novaria
alright this review is going to be abit harsh, but every first time writer should have one to mold them into better writers. I see you have a basic storyline, which is pretty good, and you have the charecter's in basic form, could be better at that, but from what you've written their ok. You could work on a more detailed chapter, and I noticed that you would cram two sentences together when there should have been a coma, period, or exclamation mark. Work on that. Spelling was in good order, i dont have anything complaints in the department. Paraghraphs were written in good form. When you made the charecters speak it sounded like they were speaking to fast. slow that down abit and let it flow, not rush. also i noticed that you put spaces inbetween the final words of a sentance and the period, coma, etc. work on that please. other then that this chapter went along pretty well. O, one more thing. If Inuyasha used Iron Reaver Soul Stealer on Kouga, he would be ripped apart. As a final word, work on futer fight scene's, they need to be long. So, with all that said and done, I hope this was helpfull, i feel that all new writer's need alteast one harsh review to get them going. keep it up.
11Reza Novariaalright this review is going to be abit harsh, but every first time writer should have one to mold them into better writers. I see you have a basic storyline, which is pretty good, and you have the charecter's in basic form, could be better at that, but from what you've written their ok. You could work on a more detailed chapter, and I noticed that you would cram two sentences together when there should have been a coma, period, or exclamation mark. Work on that. Spelling was in good order, i dont have anything complaints in the department. Paraghraphs were written in good form. When you made the charecters speak it sounded like they were speaking to fast. slow that down abit and let it flow, not rush. also i noticed that you put spaces inbetween the final words of a sentance and the period, coma, etc. work on that please. other then that this chapter went along pretty well. O, one more thing. If Inuyasha used Iron Reaver Soul Stealer on Kouga, he would be ripped apart. As a final word, work on futer fight scene's, they need to be long. So, with all that said and done, I hope this was helpfull, i feel that all new writer's need alteast one harsh review to get them going. keep it up.
9/14/2005 c1 deeplyblue
ok. well that was nicely written I have to say. But I would like to read more to get a better idea of this story. Uppdate soon!
Happy Writings!
-ms.deep
ok. well that was nicely written I have to say. But I would like to read more to get a better idea of this story. Uppdate soon!
Happy Writings!
-ms.deep