
7/14/2010 c58 CATlin
This is by far the best story i have ever read it was a wonderful story it was absoulutley the best thing ive ever read thank you for writting this
This is by far the best story i have ever read it was a wonderful story it was absoulutley the best thing ive ever read thank you for writting this
4/7/2010 c58 TeamPapaya
i havnt reviewed before now but i really enjoyed reading this story it was written greatly and it was funny and sad and scary but all in all it was fantastic:L
i havnt reviewed before now but i really enjoyed reading this story it was written greatly and it was funny and sad and scary but all in all it was fantastic:L
1/25/2010 c58 tryntee13
I know this story is almost 2 1/2 years old. But it was brilliant through and through. You have a true talent to grab your reader and keep them in the moment. I couldn't stop reading and I hope you continue to keep writing.
I know this story is almost 2 1/2 years old. But it was brilliant through and through. You have a true talent to grab your reader and keep them in the moment. I couldn't stop reading and I hope you continue to keep writing.
8/15/2008 c58
4emmy1124
You know, this was on my story alert...I think. I KNOW I read about half or a little more at first. I realized since I favorited this, I hadn't read all of it. So I just did. It was spectacular. ALL of it. I'm so sorry for all the hardships you went through during this story. I had a bad couple years a while back, too. Uncle, Hurricane Katrina (she ate my house, my job, my car...), grandmother, and then 21 year old cousin (heart attack)...all in about two years. So I feel your pain. I hope you are doing better.
Now, on to the story. It was real. The whole thing. You did an amazing job, your writing is superb. Your spelling was off a bit, but I'm just anal like that. I knew what words you were using and mentally corrected them in my head. So...I would love to check out more of your work, and hope they impress me as much as this did. :)
-Emily

You know, this was on my story alert...I think. I KNOW I read about half or a little more at first. I realized since I favorited this, I hadn't read all of it. So I just did. It was spectacular. ALL of it. I'm so sorry for all the hardships you went through during this story. I had a bad couple years a while back, too. Uncle, Hurricane Katrina (she ate my house, my job, my car...), grandmother, and then 21 year old cousin (heart attack)...all in about two years. So I feel your pain. I hope you are doing better.
Now, on to the story. It was real. The whole thing. You did an amazing job, your writing is superb. Your spelling was off a bit, but I'm just anal like that. I knew what words you were using and mentally corrected them in my head. So...I would love to check out more of your work, and hope they impress me as much as this did. :)
-Emily
6/20/2008 c58
31Girl of Light Writer
this is such an amazing story. a tale of the transformation and trials of two people and how life seems to get in the way as they find themselves and love. good job. perfect.

this is such an amazing story. a tale of the transformation and trials of two people and how life seems to get in the way as they find themselves and love. good job. perfect.
2/12/2008 c1
4emmy1124
This is great so far. I stumbled across it. I hope you don't take this as a flame. I would never put someone down that I didn't know. Since you said you have dyslexia, maybe you should find someone to read your work for you before it's published. Your grammar is not that bad, and it's mostly misspellings. The plot, however, is so good, that you just kinda bypass the words! I'm on chapter 10, now, I think, and look forward to a relaxing day of reading (had a major dental procedure yesterday...I'm not getting off the couch!)

This is great so far. I stumbled across it. I hope you don't take this as a flame. I would never put someone down that I didn't know. Since you said you have dyslexia, maybe you should find someone to read your work for you before it's published. Your grammar is not that bad, and it's mostly misspellings. The plot, however, is so good, that you just kinda bypass the words! I'm on chapter 10, now, I think, and look forward to a relaxing day of reading (had a major dental procedure yesterday...I'm not getting off the couch!)
12/19/2007 c6 EternlSrvtude
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT
LUV IT
LUV It
LUV
IT
ps its definitely not "defiantly"
yasmin
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT
LUV IT
LUV It
LUV
IT
ps its definitely not "defiantly"
yasmin
12/7/2007 c58
3CaNdY-FlOsS-07
I know its a bit late ( Cough Cough) but i totally lovve this story and you are an amazing author!
Nuff Luv
CaNdY-FlOsS
x-x-x

I know its a bit late ( Cough Cough) but i totally lovve this story and you are an amazing author!
Nuff Luv
CaNdY-FlOsS
x-x-x
11/6/2007 c1
2aden mourningstar
I thought it was a good chapter, yoou just need to watch switching in between tenses. There were a couple of places where u switched back and forth from first to third person. But other than that I can't wait to read more! =^.^=

I thought it was a good chapter, yoou just need to watch switching in between tenses. There were a couple of places where u switched back and forth from first to third person. But other than that I can't wait to read more! =^.^=
10/21/2007 c1 steven
reading the first page i like it but really i liek just about anyhting about harry potter and stuff liek that but i just finshed the 7th book so i i kno what ure talking about if i hadnt i wouldnet even kno the hell ure tlaking about lol any way i liek so keep up the good work
reading the first page i like it but really i liek just about anyhting about harry potter and stuff liek that but i just finshed the 7th book so i i kno what ure talking about if i hadnt i wouldnet even kno the hell ure tlaking about lol any way i liek so keep up the good work
10/20/2007 c1 raka
Hey! I've just read the epilogue of flowers in her hair. it's great! those who dont wanna read it, you should ask them to, cause this is the perfect ending, i wish j.k rowling,s story had this ending. And by the way, i read the whole story thi month, whole of it together. i was really wishing that j.k rowling would finally show malfoy as everyone's friend, and that ron and hermione would have lots of children. but as a H.P fan, you must have already read 'the deathly hallows' and know th epilogue, it disappointed me a bit. but don't think i didnt like the book, it was great. anyway, back to your story. it was more fantastic than i would have imagined! wish i could write like you. can you please send the names of other H.P fanfics you have written, or planning to write? i'll read and review for all of them, i promise! i couldnt send review for any chapters because of some personal problems, so sory. i'm from bangladesh, where are you from? and can you tell me your full name? if you dont mind?
Hey! I've just read the epilogue of flowers in her hair. it's great! those who dont wanna read it, you should ask them to, cause this is the perfect ending, i wish j.k rowling,s story had this ending. And by the way, i read the whole story thi month, whole of it together. i was really wishing that j.k rowling would finally show malfoy as everyone's friend, and that ron and hermione would have lots of children. but as a H.P fan, you must have already read 'the deathly hallows' and know th epilogue, it disappointed me a bit. but don't think i didnt like the book, it was great. anyway, back to your story. it was more fantastic than i would have imagined! wish i could write like you. can you please send the names of other H.P fanfics you have written, or planning to write? i'll read and review for all of them, i promise! i couldnt send review for any chapters because of some personal problems, so sory. i'm from bangladesh, where are you from? and can you tell me your full name? if you dont mind?
10/6/2007 c58 dancerrdw
aww i am sad it is over but i loved it i hope you keep writing and i will read...like i said i really liked this a lot :D
aww i am sad it is over but i loved it i hope you keep writing and i will read...like i said i really liked this a lot :D