for Fears9/24/2005 c1 ThrowAway111120
I loved it. It was beautiful. You're right, it is more realistic that they don't end up together. Wonderful story.
I loved it. It was beautiful. You're right, it is more realistic that they don't end up together. Wonderful story.
9/17/2005 c1 kimpster
the writng is perfect lol, it was dissapointing that they didnt end up as a couple, but how you ended the story atleast made a picture that wont make me go crying asking for more details. very satisfying.
write more -D
the writng is perfect lol, it was dissapointing that they didnt end up as a couple, but how you ended the story atleast made a picture that wont make me go crying asking for more details. very satisfying.
write more -D
9/17/2005 c1 
8GQSecondAct
this was interesting, and a good read. i think you know the characters very well. i was a little confused though; i dont really get the premise of this story and some of the loose ends you just sort of left hanging. for example, we never find out how rory got his coat, etc. this made the story a little less convincing. but you did a very good job with the characterizing. the dialouge was great.
keep it up.
-molly-
8GQSecondActthis was interesting, and a good read. i think you know the characters very well. i was a little confused though; i dont really get the premise of this story and some of the loose ends you just sort of left hanging. for example, we never find out how rory got his coat, etc. this made the story a little less convincing. but you did a very good job with the characterizing. the dialouge was great.
keep it up.
-molly-
9/17/2005 c1 sarah
aww...I was lookin for some lit...ok it was good do another
aww...I was lookin for some lit...ok it was good do another