for ROAD TRIP!12/15/2006 c5 
56Sour Schuyler
^-^ I thought this was funny! He he... poor Sherry. Um... some things it could have used: It could have used more details in describing places, such as the hotel where they stayed or what kind of car they were in. The first chapter was double-spaced, so that was annoying. Um... yeah. I liked this. :)
56Sour Schuyler^-^ I thought this was funny! He he... poor Sherry. Um... some things it could have used: It could have used more details in describing places, such as the hotel where they stayed or what kind of car they were in. The first chapter was double-spaced, so that was annoying. Um... yeah. I liked this. :)
12/1/2005 c5 7Shining Charizard
Isa- I mean, Yami-Sama! It is I, SC, of the British Blokes! That story was great! You should definitely do another one; maybe not a sequal, but something funny. I enjoyed everybody yelling at everybody else, and the craziness of their trip reminded me of all the weird stuff we did on ours. (Remember the bridge thing?) So yeah, this was awesome! Go Yami-Sama, Lord of Sunglasses!
7Shining CharizardIsa- I mean, Yami-Sama! It is I, SC, of the British Blokes! That story was great! You should definitely do another one; maybe not a sequal, but something funny. I enjoyed everybody yelling at everybody else, and the craziness of their trip reminded me of all the weird stuff we did on ours. (Remember the bridge thing?) So yeah, this was awesome! Go Yami-Sama, Lord of Sunglasses!
11/8/2005 c5 6Bwack Dwanzo
=^o^= aww! Thankiez! =^^= that wuz a pretty good endin, but heer'z sum tipz:
1) Don't try to rush to the end
2) be a little more descrictive
that'z about it i think... XDXDXD i cant wait till u post that yaoi lemon! I wanna c if i cant ATLEAST make it through chappie 1 ! XDXDXDXD
~Kai =3 good job!
6Bwack Dwanzo=^o^= aww! Thankiez! =^^= that wuz a pretty good endin, but heer'z sum tipz:
1) Don't try to rush to the end
2) be a little more descrictive
that'z about it i think... XDXDXD i cant wait till u post that yaoi lemon! I wanna c if i cant ATLEAST make it through chappie 1 ! XDXDXDXD
~Kai =3 good job!
10/23/2005 c4 6Bwack Dwanzo
XDXDXDXDXD awsome! good chappie! XDXD hope u get yer projects dun wit a good grade! Kai!
~Kai
6Bwack DwanzoXDXDXDXDXD awsome! good chappie! XDXD hope u get yer projects dun wit a good grade! Kai!
~Kai
10/3/2005 c3 56Sour Schuyler
I thought this chapter was great. I thought it was better-written than the first chapter, at least, and mucho interesting.
56Sour SchuylerI thought this chapter was great. I thought it was better-written than the first chapter, at least, and mucho interesting.
10/3/2005 c1 Sour Schuyler
You'd of thought that they wouldn't have let Bakura drive. I thought Marik was going to offer Yami shampoo? How is that arguing? Eh, whatever. Okay start.
You'd of thought that they wouldn't have let Bakura drive. I thought Marik was going to offer Yami shampoo? How is that arguing? Eh, whatever. Okay start.
10/3/2005 c1 3Dead Reckoning
LOL! I LUV IT! it is soo funny. i was supposed to be doing homework but am reading fanfics.
you should feel luved, but this is a good story. I like it alot.
and HEY! i luv yami's hair!
-sam
3Dead ReckoningLOL! I LUV IT! it is soo funny. i was supposed to be doing homework but am reading fanfics.
you should feel luved, but this is a good story. I like it alot.
and HEY! i luv yami's hair!
-sam