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12/17/2005 c1 mnb123clowngirl
You reprisent Egon really well, and I love you descriptions. But I feel that I need to care for the characters more, because- I cared about Egon sort of, becuase I love him- but Meredith? I didn't really care all that much about her. TO really make a good story, make me Care. about the characters. Unless they arn't important that is. But these two are.

right on! (:
9/20/2005 c1 37Avalon.Roxy
An interesting story. I wouldn't mind seeing where else it goes, especially with the one about Egon's mother.
9/19/2005 c1 Mythic Rose
I adore this story. It is a very realistic portrayal of a marriage breakdown, and I really love your unique and adult perspective on the characters' lives. I am eagerly looking forward to reading further stories from you.
9/19/2005 c1 38GirlX2
Interesting. Its always neat to have a look into the live's of the GB's before they were GB's. Bravo.

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