for A Walk to Remember2/2/2008 c12 
2RaysGirl12908
loved it!
i love this movie =]
but you should try and make the chapters a little bit longer.it would help.
2RaysGirl12908loved it!
i love this movie =]
but you should try and make the chapters a little bit longer.it would help.
1/23/2008 c12 6realfanficts
Hey, glad to hear something from you. It's been a while, and I was beginning to worry. Anyway...
No, Hermione, Ron's just not that good of an actor. He means it.
Huh? Mr. Weasley left? Was this something mentioned earlier in the story that I'm not remembering?
6realfanfictsHey, glad to hear something from you. It's been a while, and I was beginning to worry. Anyway...
No, Hermione, Ron's just not that good of an actor. He means it.
Huh? Mr. Weasley left? Was this something mentioned earlier in the story that I'm not remembering?
1/14/2008 c5 Strange Little Wizard
Hey! I loved the idea of making a r&hr fic based on a walk to remember. personally, I love that movie; its one of my favorites.
You've got the dialogs and you have created and adapted harry potter's world to the fic and that's grate but you really ought to describe the scenes more than that. Have you tried to read it yourself? it goes so quick that I get lost. there was a part in wehere you used one line to say "He stared at her" an other to say "He tried so hard to memorize his lines", I mean, we understand it but you need to describe more, like how they feel, what they think or even imagine, and if you dont know: come up with something.
There isn't a clear difference between scenes. In the first chapter I never knew from where colin jumped or when they got to the place, were they jumping in their same places or from a high platform? I don't know, it never says it.
Well try to apply all this advices on future chapters. Hope to be of help and not hurt you.
sorry for my bad english (im from mexico)
Hey! I loved the idea of making a r&hr fic based on a walk to remember. personally, I love that movie; its one of my favorites.
You've got the dialogs and you have created and adapted harry potter's world to the fic and that's grate but you really ought to describe the scenes more than that. Have you tried to read it yourself? it goes so quick that I get lost. there was a part in wehere you used one line to say "He stared at her" an other to say "He tried so hard to memorize his lines", I mean, we understand it but you need to describe more, like how they feel, what they think or even imagine, and if you dont know: come up with something.
There isn't a clear difference between scenes. In the first chapter I never knew from where colin jumped or when they got to the place, were they jumping in their same places or from a high platform? I don't know, it never says it.
Well try to apply all this advices on future chapters. Hope to be of help and not hurt you.
sorry for my bad english (im from mexico)
1/19/2007 c11 Every Other Memory
it was well written. I liked the lines you used from the movie. Have you ever read the book? I'm glad you began to drift away from following the movie exactlly. It is refreshing. All in all good job.
it was well written. I liked the lines you used from the movie. Have you ever read the book? I'm glad you began to drift away from following the movie exactlly. It is refreshing. All in all good job.
10/20/2006 c11 26Ski000Girl
Hey you said the new chapter would be up in a day and it's over 2 months later. Why haven't you updated? Please i like this story. It's really different from all others but that's what makes it good.
26Ski000GirlHey you said the new chapter would be up in a day and it's over 2 months later. Why haven't you updated? Please i like this story. It's really different from all others but that's what makes it good.
9/18/2006 c11 poppy
HEY this is really neat i love it keep up the great writing cant wait for the next chapta
HEY this is really neat i love it keep up the great writing cant wait for the next chapta
8/8/2006 c11 3Hermione-Leia Skywalker-Potter
It's a really good chapter. I love how the story's going. I'm thinking I should read "The Parent Trap" by Dutchtulips as this story is dedicated to it. Thus it must be a good FF. By the way it's spelled volunteer not volenteer LOL. I guess you're just proving your point. oh, do you wanna see step up on fri. amy, two friends of her's, possible Lizzye and I. It should be fun, amy's going to leave in a couple weeks and she wanted to spend some time with you and lizzye before she moves to a little town in the middle NB a province no one cares about lol. let me know if your busy/free.
3Hermione-Leia Skywalker-PotterIt's a really good chapter. I love how the story's going. I'm thinking I should read "The Parent Trap" by Dutchtulips as this story is dedicated to it. Thus it must be a good FF. By the way it's spelled volunteer not volenteer LOL. I guess you're just proving your point. oh, do you wanna see step up on fri. amy, two friends of her's, possible Lizzye and I. It should be fun, amy's going to leave in a couple weeks and she wanted to spend some time with you and lizzye before she moves to a little town in the middle NB a province no one cares about lol. let me know if your busy/free.
8/7/2006 c3 yummydreams
LMAO! hahahaha, I loved the bit when Ron and Harry were going over the lines!
LMAO! hahahaha, I loved the bit when Ron and Harry were going over the lines!
8/3/2006 c11 6realfanficts
Is there something you're not revealing to your readers? Whether that's the case or not, I'm still reading!
6realfanfictsIs there something you're not revealing to your readers? Whether that's the case or not, I'm still reading!
8/2/2006 c11 27Nymphadora
Great job, but maybe... don't kill Hermione off...please. I'll give you a cookie... and a pony...please. I'd be happy to beta for you.
27NymphadoraGreat job, but maybe... don't kill Hermione off...please. I'll give you a cookie... and a pony...please. I'd be happy to beta for you.
8/2/2006 c11 Volleybalgirl-2892
hey! good chapter, i liked it how u changed it from the movie...i'll be happee to be ur beta, u've seen how i write, but i honestly don't think u need one that much...but if u do, u know wat to do! :-) update soon plz! :-)
hey! good chapter, i liked it how u changed it from the movie...i'll be happee to be ur beta, u've seen how i write, but i honestly don't think u need one that much...but if u do, u know wat to do! :-) update soon plz! :-)