for All The Difference7/3/2017 c36 
1E.Richtofen
Loved it, enjoyed every chapter. I kind of feel like the last chapter may have been a bit rushed with the NaruHina and SasuSaku parts, but aside from that, it was great...now where is Chibi Legends, I cant find it.
1E.RichtofenLoved it, enjoyed every chapter. I kind of feel like the last chapter may have been a bit rushed with the NaruHina and SasuSaku parts, but aside from that, it was great...now where is Chibi Legends, I cant find it.
7/3/2017 c28 E.Richtofen
This is the most intriguing pairing I have ever seen for Gaara, I'm not sure how to explain it, but it feels like it has so much life to it. The OC was crafted brilliantly and I actually enjoy seeing more of Gaara. Great job with this and all of your preceding chapters, it seems that the chapters just keep on getting better and better.
This is the most intriguing pairing I have ever seen for Gaara, I'm not sure how to explain it, but it feels like it has so much life to it. The OC was crafted brilliantly and I actually enjoy seeing more of Gaara. Great job with this and all of your preceding chapters, it seems that the chapters just keep on getting better and better.
7/3/2017 c24 E.Richtofen
I can't "he", a major villain, was defeated without the use of a power up. That alone made this chapter amazing. Too bad the actual Naruto canon didn't have similar fates to some of the major antagonists.
I can't "he", a major villain, was defeated without the use of a power up. That alone made this chapter amazing. Too bad the actual Naruto canon didn't have similar fates to some of the major antagonists.
7/2/2017 c11 E.Richtofen
I enjoy reading every chapter so far. The flow is great and the character development seems realistic (not sure how to put it differently, but kind of like how they would react to the situation if it was canon). I actually enjoying read your fluff, its definitely better than the Naruto canon fluff. I dislike Sakura in the canon story, but she is likable in your AU. Keep up the good work!
I enjoy reading every chapter so far. The flow is great and the character development seems realistic (not sure how to put it differently, but kind of like how they would react to the situation if it was canon). I actually enjoying read your fluff, its definitely better than the Naruto canon fluff. I dislike Sakura in the canon story, but she is likable in your AU. Keep up the good work!
10/21/2015 c3 Shinobi Gatana
Naruto needs to learn the RasenShuriken (Which I hope he does), since it took Kakuzu down on a nearly molecular level.
Naruto needs to learn the RasenShuriken (Which I hope he does), since it took Kakuzu down on a nearly molecular level.
4/12/2014 c12 socorro333
ahaha omg naruto was pretending? that's so funny and i could totally see him doing that to stay another night, and of course, running into things!i hehe
great job! :)
ahaha omg naruto was pretending? that's so funny and i could totally see him doing that to stay another night, and of course, running into things!i hehe
great job! :)
7/23/2013 c1 demonsoul
you truly are a gifted writer i can not deny that but i feel like you are making Hinata seem out of character and i don't find the random Japanese to be necessary or that it compliments your writing. In fact i think that it hinders it and makes the story feel more forced than anything. However i did in fact enjoy the story that you wrote and i think that if you were to change the names of the characters you could probably use this as either the prologue or the start of the first chapter of a new book that would be very interesting to read and hard to put down. These are just some suggestions from someone who enjoyed your work and a little constructive criticism to hopefully help you out.
you truly are a gifted writer i can not deny that but i feel like you are making Hinata seem out of character and i don't find the random Japanese to be necessary or that it compliments your writing. In fact i think that it hinders it and makes the story feel more forced than anything. However i did in fact enjoy the story that you wrote and i think that if you were to change the names of the characters you could probably use this as either the prologue or the start of the first chapter of a new book that would be very interesting to read and hard to put down. These are just some suggestions from someone who enjoyed your work and a little constructive criticism to hopefully help you out.