for Harry Potter and his Witches8/8 c5 
1themadmartian
I don't usually critique stories, but several spelling errors make it hard to enjoy reading this one.
Wand instead of Ward and Clatter instead of Clutter.
Get a Beta to proof read before posting.
1themadmartianI don't usually critique stories, but several spelling errors make it hard to enjoy reading this one.
Wand instead of Ward and Clatter instead of Clutter.
Get a Beta to proof read before posting.
7/9/2022 c16 EternalAnglo94
You realise that your making the Order look like absolute cunts right?
They seem to be keeps secrets from Harry spying on him and not being useful in any way
You realise that your making the Order look like absolute cunts right?
They seem to be keeps secrets from Harry spying on him and not being useful in any way
7/9/2022 c13 EternalAnglo94
I always hated Dumbledork and hated that everyone followed him like sheeple
I always hated Dumbledork and hated that everyone followed him like sheeple
3/23/2018 c13 Sadhaka
Tortured, raped, beaten, humiliated, and they still don't rain him to defend himself. That's just a bad story, doesn't help that you fall into mixing tech ideas with magic.
Tortured, raped, beaten, humiliated, and they still don't rain him to defend himself. That's just a bad story, doesn't help that you fall into mixing tech ideas with magic.
6/23/2017 c17 1automaton14
"I'll finish this story no matter what," the author declared, just before abandoning the story.
1automaton14"I'll finish this story no matter what," the author declared, just before abandoning the story.
1/9/2017 c17 Corwyn
Enjoying the story, thanks for sharing it with us.
Enjoying the story, thanks for sharing it with us.
12/21/2016 c17 Last Harper
Ok I'm asuming that fanfictiion is just fucked up but they killed your story .
Ok I'm asuming that fanfictiion is just fucked up but they killed your story .
12/9/2016 c12 Anonymous
Harry can withstand the imperio curse from Barty Crouch Jr. and Voldemort, but he falls to Malfoy?
Harry can withstand the imperio curse from Barty Crouch Jr. and Voldemort, but he falls to Malfoy?
7/30/2015 c6 ggggg
This is really good
This is really good