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10/15/2012 c12 klarissa.pereda
I shall read and follow till the end!
10/15/2012 c10 klarissa.pereda
Hahahaha X3
10/15/2012 c8 klarissa.pereda
Love, love, love, love, love, love, LOVE!
9/29/2012 c12 Xd
Yeah but you haven't updated for four years dude. -.- Hypocrite.
9/24/2012 c12 Koto
I love this! I think is much better than the manga. I hope you will keep writing the story.
9/17/2012 c12 2Cho-No-Iro
PLEASE put the next chapter out, cause I'm almost getting sick of squealing about it! I love this story and I'd hate for it to be put on hiatus or abandoned :(
5/15/2012 c12 1JadenWinters
Great story! i really like the Naruto in this story. and a question: what is going to happen to Gaara? will he end up joining the shadow village?

cant wait for the next chapter.
5/10/2012 c12 Alexandria-reid-Winchester
i...need...MORRRREEEE!

SOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD KEEP WRITING!

JA NE
3/28/2012 c2 1Etiolates
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YOU DISGRACE THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE!

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Was what I said last time. However, seeing you ave rewritten the story I thougt I may have owed you another review. In that case, here:

This story is much, much, much better than the first version. I think you did a good job of the rewrite - there aren't any grammar mistakes or misspells I can detect at first glance. Good Luck Writing!

Sincerely,

ManaCrucifixion

Formerly, Syn.Embrace Of Death
3/27/2012 c12 1king of the shadows
great story so far. cant wait to read what happens next. 1 thing naruto has a wind chakra in cannon ya think ya can work it in. after all he has two more tails befor he hits the next (wall). just a thought

may the shadow hide you in her loveing imbrace
2/17/2012 c12 Virena Setiss
Do want do want do want MOAR. Please?... :3? I'll give you a cookie?...
12/28/2011 c1 1Etiolates
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YOU DISGRACE THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE!

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12/19/2011 c12 FanGirl2010
i have enjoyed this story. pretty cool, that was a major turn from present to past, WOW. anyway update soon, its been 5 years or almost 5 years. i thought u didnt like it when people do this
8/7/2011 c12 4NanoCarp
dont die huh? yeah... that's probably a good idea. I have a question, though. When did the humor become so frequent? I didn't notice it increasing so it seemed natural. Good job on not letting it seem too much like a bunch of random jokes from nowhere.
5/22/2011 c12 6Irish Shift
this is a great story I hope you update soon
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