for Henzuru9/29/2012 c12 Xd
Yeah but you haven't updated for four years dude. -.- Hypocrite.
Yeah but you haven't updated for four years dude. -.- Hypocrite.
9/24/2012 c12 Koto
I love this! I think is much better than the manga. I hope you will keep writing the story.
I love this! I think is much better than the manga. I hope you will keep writing the story.
9/17/2012 c12 
2Cho-No-Iro
PLEASE put the next chapter out, cause I'm almost getting sick of squealing about it! I love this story and I'd hate for it to be put on hiatus or abandoned :(
2Cho-No-IroPLEASE put the next chapter out, cause I'm almost getting sick of squealing about it! I love this story and I'd hate for it to be put on hiatus or abandoned :(
5/15/2012 c12 1JadenWinters
Great story! i really like the Naruto in this story. and a question: what is going to happen to Gaara? will he end up joining the shadow village?
cant wait for the next chapter.
1JadenWintersGreat story! i really like the Naruto in this story. and a question: what is going to happen to Gaara? will he end up joining the shadow village?
cant wait for the next chapter.
5/10/2012 c12 Alexandria-reid-Winchester
i...need...MORRRREEEE!
SOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD KEEP WRITING!
JA NE
i...need...MORRRREEEE!
SOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD KEEP WRITING!
JA NE
3/28/2012 c2 1Etiolates
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YOU DISGRACE THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE!
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Was what I said last time. However, seeing you ave rewritten the story I thougt I may have owed you another review. In that case, here:
This story is much, much, much better than the first version. I think you did a good job of the rewrite - there aren't any grammar mistakes or misspells I can detect at first glance. Good Luck Writing!
Sincerely,
ManaCrucifixion
Formerly, Syn.Embrace Of Death
1Etiolates...
YOU DISGRACE THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE!
...
Was what I said last time. However, seeing you ave rewritten the story I thougt I may have owed you another review. In that case, here:
This story is much, much, much better than the first version. I think you did a good job of the rewrite - there aren't any grammar mistakes or misspells I can detect at first glance. Good Luck Writing!
Sincerely,
ManaCrucifixion
Formerly, Syn.Embrace Of Death
3/27/2012 c12 1king of the shadows
great story so far. cant wait to read what happens next. 1 thing naruto has a wind chakra in cannon ya think ya can work it in. after all he has two more tails befor he hits the next (wall). just a thought
may the shadow hide you in her loveing imbrace
1king of the shadowsgreat story so far. cant wait to read what happens next. 1 thing naruto has a wind chakra in cannon ya think ya can work it in. after all he has two more tails befor he hits the next (wall). just a thought
may the shadow hide you in her loveing imbrace
12/19/2011 c12 FanGirl2010
i have enjoyed this story. pretty cool, that was a major turn from present to past, WOW. anyway update soon, its been 5 years or almost 5 years. i thought u didnt like it when people do this
i have enjoyed this story. pretty cool, that was a major turn from present to past, WOW. anyway update soon, its been 5 years or almost 5 years. i thought u didnt like it when people do this