
7/11/2013 c11
1barber477
This is a good story so far, you need to keep going so I can watch them KICK THAT CHARZARD'S A*S! :( I can't wait to read the next chapter. ( please have them kick his a*s in the next chapter...please have them kick his a*s in the next chapter... please have them kick his a*s in the next chapter :) )

This is a good story so far, you need to keep going so I can watch them KICK THAT CHARZARD'S A*S! :( I can't wait to read the next chapter. ( please have them kick his a*s in the next chapter...please have them kick his a*s in the next chapter... please have them kick his a*s in the next chapter :) )
7/17/2009 c2
69Alex Warlorn
My one regret is that you never posted the remainder of this story on this sight. It would have been so much fun for everyone to read it here.

My one regret is that you never posted the remainder of this story on this sight. It would have been so much fun for everyone to read it here.
9/6/2003 c11
20Sylvia Viridian
Oh, wow. Plot twist after plot twist, and I am HOOKED! 'Specially since I'm a Mewtwo fan. ;) Pleeze, pleeze update soon!

Oh, wow. Plot twist after plot twist, and I am HOOKED! 'Specially since I'm a Mewtwo fan. ;) Pleeze, pleeze update soon!
1/11/2003 c11 DamianH8er
I HATE DAMIAN! DIE YOU F*****' BASTARD! GO TO DAMN HELL!
Pardon me...
I HATE DAMIAN! DIE YOU F*****' BASTARD! GO TO DAMN HELL!
Pardon me...
1/4/2003 c1 Guest
this is getting...interesting...
this is getting...interesting...
7/15/2002 c1
15laZardo
DAMMIT!
Somebody got to the Charmeleon-morph before I did! My description of Bud describes something more bloody-roar-ish.

DAMMIT!
Somebody got to the Charmeleon-morph before I did! My description of Bud describes something more bloody-roar-ish.
1/15/2002 c11
3Damos Taranth
I'll make this clear - I know that Houou is not a psychic-type, but I didn't at the time in the chain. I had originally changed it to be Lugia in this fic, but the current state in the chain means that I'd have to figure out a completely different storyline if that were to happen - and plus, the other group needs a psychic-type with them too. So I changed it back. Holly is psychic - whether it's a direct result of the Houou pokemon, or simply a latent ability that became active at the time of the change is your choice.
This swap and swap back means that any mention of Gold where Silver should be, or vice versa, or Silver using flame attacks or whatever is me overlooking something in the changes. Please tell me where they are so I can fix it!

I'll make this clear - I know that Houou is not a psychic-type, but I didn't at the time in the chain. I had originally changed it to be Lugia in this fic, but the current state in the chain means that I'd have to figure out a completely different storyline if that were to happen - and plus, the other group needs a psychic-type with them too. So I changed it back. Holly is psychic - whether it's a direct result of the Houou pokemon, or simply a latent ability that became active at the time of the change is your choice.
This swap and swap back means that any mention of Gold where Silver should be, or vice versa, or Silver using flame attacks or whatever is me overlooking something in the changes. Please tell me where they are so I can fix it!
1/15/2002 c11 BSM Maura whatever
Damian caught -Silver- not -Gold- Becuase -Gold- isn't actually -psychic- type.
Damian caught -Silver- not -Gold- Becuase -Gold- isn't actually -psychic- type.
1/15/2002 c11
69Alex Warlorn
I was afraid you had given up on the ff.net version of this. I'm glade I was wrong . . . Good translation as always.
Though you made the mistake of having Laura be a fire type.

I was afraid you had given up on the ff.net version of this. I'm glade I was wrong . . . Good translation as always.
Though you made the mistake of having Laura be a fire type.
1/13/2002 c10 BlackShadowMew
Ner... Write more or i'll be forced to find the chain to read it!
Ner... Write more or i'll be forced to find the chain to read it!
10/19/2001 c10 Granite Vulpix
...ok..that was so spooky...had me worrying for ages...but that is a GREAT FIC! Let me know about any new chapters, please?
...ok..that was so spooky...had me worrying for ages...but that is a GREAT FIC! Let me know about any new chapters, please?