for Night Crawlers5/1/2006 c4 
23Kitty-Kat Allie
thank you for putting these stories up, i completely forgot about nightcrawlers. I guess you're editing them or something, becuz i remember this story was done a long time ago. i can't wait to reread it all over again! so far, it's as good as i remember it.
23Kitty-Kat Alliethank you for putting these stories up, i completely forgot about nightcrawlers. I guess you're editing them or something, becuz i remember this story was done a long time ago. i can't wait to reread it all over again! so far, it's as good as i remember it.
11/18/2005 c4 user41847294057217
Im so sorry it took me so long to read all of this. I really like it, please update soon. I'm hoping for a romance eventually between Vale and Gohan (I really HATE Videl). And, um, wasn't Mr. Miagi the name of the martial arts teacher from "Kirate Kid"? Anyway, loved it.
~daffodil
Im so sorry it took me so long to read all of this. I really like it, please update soon. I'm hoping for a romance eventually between Vale and Gohan (I really HATE Videl). And, um, wasn't Mr. Miagi the name of the martial arts teacher from "Kirate Kid"? Anyway, loved it.
~daffodil
10/31/2005 c4 16storm-of-insanity
i think the fight scenes could have been a bit longer but then again, it's all down to you. it's got a good plot though :D
16storm-of-insanityi think the fight scenes could have been a bit longer but then again, it's all down to you. it's got a good plot though :D
10/28/2005 c4 chris
this story is very interesting indeed, i like the plot so far, its moving along fairly quickly and i can tell that its only going to get better. i just have a question or ten, lol. did these creatures come from outerspace, or are they demons or something. also will the other z fighters get a chance to come back and help them fight or will it only be gohan trunks, piccolo and vale, i actually wouldnt mind if it was, it would be differnt. another question i would like to ask is how far are you going to have gohan and trunks go with being super saiyans or am i going to have to wait to find out. and the last one is i know kami got killed but how come piccolo didnt die, and is the lookout mostly in contact.
sorry for all the questions i like to put authors through the ringer, its nothing that i think your doing wrong, i just think this story has a lot of potential especially seeing as you have writen such good stories before.
this story is very interesting indeed, i like the plot so far, its moving along fairly quickly and i can tell that its only going to get better. i just have a question or ten, lol. did these creatures come from outerspace, or are they demons or something. also will the other z fighters get a chance to come back and help them fight or will it only be gohan trunks, piccolo and vale, i actually wouldnt mind if it was, it would be differnt. another question i would like to ask is how far are you going to have gohan and trunks go with being super saiyans or am i going to have to wait to find out. and the last one is i know kami got killed but how come piccolo didnt die, and is the lookout mostly in contact.
sorry for all the questions i like to put authors through the ringer, its nothing that i think your doing wrong, i just think this story has a lot of potential especially seeing as you have writen such good stories before.
9/25/2005 c3 10PlumPigeon
SuperSanne: gah! I can't take the suspense!
Susan and Mirai Lara: Hehe, so, you finaly admit you don't have any patience?
SuperSanne: Hey! watch it, or I'l let Cell absorb you both in my next chapter
Susan and Mirai lara: -gulp-
10PlumPigeonSuperSanne: gah! I can't take the suspense!
Susan and Mirai Lara: Hehe, so, you finaly admit you don't have any patience?
SuperSanne: Hey! watch it, or I'l let Cell absorb you both in my next chapter
Susan and Mirai lara: -gulp-
9/24/2005 c3 chikyu
O I remember this! Was this on another site, or did FFN kick it off a while ago? Wow! I can't wait to read more of it again!
O I remember this! Was this on another site, or did FFN kick it off a while ago? Wow! I can't wait to read more of it again!