for The Return of the Saviour
12/20/2021 c1 Guest
I actually enjoyed this. But. I think you kind of missed the mark on having Harry being all powerful. He can literally do anything. Nothing is impossible. Why does he need a wand? Why does he need to go undercover? He can literally just think about killing him in the most ridiculous way possible and it could happen. I think the limitations on Harry's power that you gave him work, but only if you establish that early on. If you had said, for instance, when he was training with Leo in the in-between, that because he's just a simple human he won't be able to do literally anything he likes and become a god. That would work and just nip any later problems in the bud. If things were portrayed in that way, what he actually does would make a lot more sense.
I still think he should have just bitch slapped Voldie into non-existence though.
I actually enjoyed this. But. I think you kind of missed the mark on having Harry being all powerful. He can literally do anything. Nothing is impossible. Why does he need a wand? Why does he need to go undercover? He can literally just think about killing him in the most ridiculous way possible and it could happen. I think the limitations on Harry's power that you gave him work, but only if you establish that early on. If you had said, for instance, when he was training with Leo in the in-between, that because he's just a simple human he won't be able to do literally anything he likes and become a god. That would work and just nip any later problems in the bud. If things were portrayed in that way, what he actually does would make a lot more sense.
I still think he should have just bitch slapped Voldie into non-existence though.
1/17/2021 c17 Supernova7
Loved this story. It was a fantastic balance with not too much powerful Harry, cautious Dumbledore, or Luna/Harry. This story wasn’t drawn out for too many chapters. I truly enjoyed this story. Keep up the great work.
Loved this story. It was a fantastic balance with not too much powerful Harry, cautious Dumbledore, or Luna/Harry. This story wasn’t drawn out for too many chapters. I truly enjoyed this story. Keep up the great work.
1/16/2021 c17 Guest
tHIS WAS SO CUTEEE
tHIS WAS SO CUTEEE
12/25/2020 c17 Gryffindor
It was brilliant loved it!
It was brilliant loved it!
8/21/2020 c17 Guest
amazing!
amazing!
3/27/2020 c17 Guest
Thank you for the wonderful story.
Thank you for the wonderful story.
10/16/2019 c11 Jestersky98
He can make anything happen with magic, why not make a spell that kills all his soul pieces including him which also is unshieldable? Problem solved
This format of magic you got for mc is so strong that this entire story is retarded if you’re forcing the plot more than harry having fun, fucking around and one shotting lv
He can make anything happen with magic, why not make a spell that kills all his soul pieces including him which also is unshieldable? Problem solved
This format of magic you got for mc is so strong that this entire story is retarded if you’re forcing the plot more than harry having fun, fucking around and one shotting lv
10/15/2019 c17 Jestersky98
Honestly can’t call this story anything other than wish fullfilment trash
This Harry is insanely op and considering his powers should simply be able to concentrate and kill lv inside hogwarts while sleeping yet you’re forcing such drama and stupidity that it unreadable
Honestly can’t call this story anything other than wish fullfilment trash
This Harry is insanely op and considering his powers should simply be able to concentrate and kill lv inside hogwarts while sleeping yet you’re forcing such drama and stupidity that it unreadable
10/15/2019 c6 Jestersky98
Why do you potray him as powerful when he hasn’t been able to do shit except play arpund with snape
Not a single thing except perhaps teleporting inside hogwarts has been impressive and frankly he’s been worse than canon
Why do you potray him as powerful when he hasn’t been able to do shit except play arpund with snape
Not a single thing except perhaps teleporting inside hogwarts has been impressive and frankly he’s been worse than canon
1/2/2019 c17 heliosoursungod
Thank you for this story, I enjoyed it very much. I like Harry and Luna stories very much. I did miss having Dobby in the story (I know he would have been dead in cannon, but Albus the manipulator was still around)
Thank you for this story, I enjoyed it very much. I like Harry and Luna stories very much. I did miss having Dobby in the story (I know he would have been dead in cannon, but Albus the manipulator was still around)