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5/13/2019 c10 turtlefanforever13
This is so real, so tender, and so wonderful. Thank you!
4/20/2013 c10 45GirlforGod99
Oh, I love it so much. It was a bit awkward having the roles reversed, but it just how much the turtles care for their father.
9/17/2012 c6 203BubblyShell22
Awesome chapter as usual. Poor Don. Even when he's young, he still wants to help his father. Such a stubborn little child. But at least Splinter reassured him and figured it would be best to give in because he knew Don was worried about him.

Ah, Leo, your little "plan" backfired, didn't it? I guess you'll think twice before trying to scare Raph again, won't you? Good job on this chapter. I swear, you're awesome at this stuff.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
9/10/2012 c3 BubblyShell22
Awww, such a cute chapter. I'm glad Raph saved Leo, and Leo does owe Raph one for that. And poor Mikey wanting to hear Sensei talk so he could make sure Sensei's still alive. Ah, Don, so jealous. You'd better watch that jealousy, Donnie boy. It can eat you up like a snake. Nicely done on this, Cyn. I loved it.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
9/8/2012 c2 BubblyShell22
Ah, so now the owing begins. And what is it with Leo and the toaster? So many stories label Leo as the one who's the worst cook. I think that this happens because they want to give Leo a flaw to work with, but I think personally that Don would be the worst cook with all that experimenting he does. Ah, Splinter wants to be stubborn, but he can't. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
8/27/2012 c1 BubblyShell22
Ah, such a wonderful start to this story. Yes, it's not easy to look after young ones when you are sick. The fact that the Turtles want to take care of their father and get along for the sake of that purpose is very touching. And poor Mikey! I can see him thinking this way. It's a good thing Leo was there to help Mikey see that Sensei will be okay. Good job on this chapter. You truly are the Queen of the Turtle Tots.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
11/4/2011 c10 32LenniluvsBrian
Adorable. Simply adorable. Scary, funny, dad, just the right mix of emotions. Loved it!

~Lenni~
12/10/2010 c2 4Giftless-Princess
It's ok Leo, I'm scared of the toaster too! lol This story is so sweet and funny and just-*squeal* Great job! ^.^
8/16/2009 c8 2AncientHistory
yeah.
8/16/2009 c7 AncientHistory
lol
8/16/2009 c6 AncientHistory
lol
8/16/2009 c5 AncientHistory
adorable
8/16/2009 c4 AncientHistory
so good
8/16/2009 c3 AncientHistory
aw.
8/16/2009 c2 AncientHistory
cute
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