for Right Turns11/26/2016 c1 Guest
What are you talking about? It was amazing! I loved it. You should have gone further with it.
What are you talking about? It was amazing! I loved it. You should have gone further with it.
9/6/2011 c1 
1Goomba
I didn't actually understand that you meant them to be kissing until you mentioneed lips in the last few lines - and then it seems like it happened too fast and like there wasn't enough story after that. Plus it was hard to follow sometimes, I felt like I didn't always know who was talking or thinking... but I did like the idea of them ending up kissing. So Thanks for that.
Jen
1GoombaI didn't actually understand that you meant them to be kissing until you mentioneed lips in the last few lines - and then it seems like it happened too fast and like there wasn't enough story after that. Plus it was hard to follow sometimes, I felt like I didn't always know who was talking or thinking... but I did like the idea of them ending up kissing. So Thanks for that.
Jen
2/14/2009 c1 4everthesickestbabe16
That was great!
i actually don't think you stalled but i think you could've written a little bit of then talking more before they kissed when they came back to the diner... but overall i loved it!
you should do a sequal!
That was great!
i actually don't think you stalled but i think you could've written a little bit of then talking more before they kissed when they came back to the diner... but overall i loved it!
you should do a sequal!
1/6/2006 c1 20Honeycups
I have never seen this show. I have no idea who the characters are. But yet I liked it. You sure have a talent. So sweet and, I love it that they're in the car, driving around.
Hey, are you alright by the way? I'm getting worried since you haven't sent me any emails lately... Hope nothing's happened. But I know how it's like...Sometimes you don't feel for writing, you would rather puke on the computer. ;)
20HoneycupsI have never seen this show. I have no idea who the characters are. But yet I liked it. You sure have a talent. So sweet and, I love it that they're in the car, driving around.
Hey, are you alright by the way? I'm getting worried since you haven't sent me any emails lately... Hope nothing's happened. But I know how it's like...Sometimes you don't feel for writing, you would rather puke on the computer. ;)
10/16/2005 c1 1mrs.patrickdrake
aw!im smiling like an idiot!that was so sweet!u need to write more^_^
1mrs.patrickdrakeaw!im smiling like an idiot!that was so sweet!u need to write more^_^
10/15/2005 c1 Andrea Rodriguez
That was so good! Please keep writing! Dean and Rory should break up so rory and jess can be together!
That was so good! Please keep writing! Dean and Rory should break up so rory and jess can be together!
10/10/2005 c1 3LorelaiRory
I know this is a one-shot, but I love it. It's just great. Please keep writing. Please.
3LorelaiRoryI know this is a one-shot, but I love it. It's just great. Please keep writing. Please.
10/9/2005 c1 quieter-writer
Make a continuance, It's a great story. See if they hide it or if dean finds out etc. And hurry with that next chapter.
Make a continuance, It's a great story. See if they hide it or if dean finds out etc. And hurry with that next chapter.
10/9/2005 c1 UnDiScOvErEdAuThOr
it was really good!
it was really good!
10/8/2005 c1 Andrea Rodriguez
No i think that was great! please keep writing!
No i think that was great! please keep writing!