for Dirty Little Secret5/6/2007 c1 Seran Hawthorne
You wanted Con.Crit? Okay, then, in the last sentence "No this would probably forever be there dirty little secret," I think it would make more sense to say, "No, this would probably forever be their dirty little secret." Just a change in punctuation and a different spelling of "there". Very wonderful story, though, I love that song and I love Drarry^^
You wanted Con.Crit? Okay, then, in the last sentence "No this would probably forever be there dirty little secret," I think it would make more sense to say, "No, this would probably forever be their dirty little secret." Just a change in punctuation and a different spelling of "there". Very wonderful story, though, I love that song and I love Drarry^^
8/13/2006 c1 charlieny
This was so good I mean everything about it was great and the song fits perfectly. Besides I love AAR.
This was so good I mean everything about it was great and the song fits perfectly. Besides I love AAR.
2/26/2006 c1 Lies-14
Forever? Why can't harry divorse Ginny and Malfoy do the same? That way, i have more Draco/Harry fanfic to read! ^_^
I love your story by the way
Forever? Why can't harry divorse Ginny and Malfoy do the same? That way, i have more Draco/Harry fanfic to read! ^_^
I love your story by the way
10/16/2005 c1 x-rated
i listened to dirty little secrets while i was reading it. yay i'm cool.
it was good.
i listened to dirty little secrets while i was reading it. yay i'm cool.
it was good.
10/11/2005 c1 
3dracorox418
i have to say that was good .. that is one of my favortive songs as well
( i can't spell sry)
keep it up
3dracorox418i have to say that was good .. that is one of my favortive songs as well
( i can't spell sry)
keep it up
10/10/2005 c1 Asato Tsuzuki
LOL, I love that song!
I was actually playing it while I was reading this! It felt so naughty to do that though!
It was very humorous, wow. Imagine making a music video out of your story! You see them being the perfect husbands and such, and then all of a sudden, you see a strange glint in their eyes and they go into a motel to get it on with each other! Now that would be a sight for sore eyes!
LOL, I love that song!
I was actually playing it while I was reading this! It felt so naughty to do that though!
It was very humorous, wow. Imagine making a music video out of your story! You see them being the perfect husbands and such, and then all of a sudden, you see a strange glint in their eyes and they go into a motel to get it on with each other! Now that would be a sight for sore eyes!
10/10/2005 c1 Asato Tsuzuki
LOL, I love that song!
I was actually playing it while I was reading this! It felt so naughty to do that though!
It was very humorous, wow. Imagine making a music video out of your story! You see them being the perfect husbands and such, and then all of a sudden, you see a strange glint in their eyes and they go into a motel to get it on with each other! Now that would be a sight for sore eyes!
LOL, I love that song!
I was actually playing it while I was reading this! It felt so naughty to do that though!
It was very humorous, wow. Imagine making a music video out of your story! You see them being the perfect husbands and such, and then all of a sudden, you see a strange glint in their eyes and they go into a motel to get it on with each other! Now that would be a sight for sore eyes!
10/9/2005 c1 pheonixtears
oh that's sad. a forbiden love that seems to be completely doomed. adventually they'll get caught, though. and that's not really fair to ginny or pansy.
oh that's sad. a forbiden love that seems to be completely doomed. adventually they'll get caught, though. and that's not really fair to ginny or pansy.
10/9/2005 c1 Remi
that was good!
that was good!
10/9/2005 c1 26The Plot Bunny Whisperer
I *love* that song. That was the perfect setting to use it in, too. Nicely done.
-Banii-chan
26The Plot Bunny WhispererI *love* that song. That was the perfect setting to use it in, too. Nicely done.
-Banii-chan