for What happens when10/16/2005 c4 mnkylvr21
I love it! Keep going! You have to!
I love it! Keep going! You have to!
10/15/2005 c4 
17Madame-S-Butterfly
“Fire!” he yelled pressing a button, two healers ran inside
“There is no fire!” one protested looking at Ron.
“Well you wouldn't have come if I yelled 'Bubbles!'” Ron said,
I loved that! The whole death eaters thing was so unexpected, but that made it really good! I thought it was just going to be someone like Malfoy (Draco not Lucius!)
Please put another chapter! Thats if you can of course!
17Madame-S-Butterfly“Fire!” he yelled pressing a button, two healers ran inside
“There is no fire!” one protested looking at Ron.
“Well you wouldn't have come if I yelled 'Bubbles!'” Ron said,
I loved that! The whole death eaters thing was so unexpected, but that made it really good! I thought it was just going to be someone like Malfoy (Draco not Lucius!)
Please put another chapter! Thats if you can of course!
10/12/2005 c3 1CanadianReject
my dearest kitty kat,
write more! ah, you used the number 87! That is so sidneys number. kidding, [well not really, cuz he does wear it] anyways, it's a really good story, and iwanna know what happens!
sam
1CanadianRejectmy dearest kitty kat,
write more! ah, you used the number 87! That is so sidneys number. kidding, [well not really, cuz he does wear it] anyways, it's a really good story, and iwanna know what happens!
sam
10/11/2005 c3 9EyesOfBlue1993
Do do do! Who's at the door! I need to know! That was so cute! I loved it! Good thing Ron came to her rescue! :)
UPDATE VERY SOON!
Lots of love!
~Ashley~
9EyesOfBlue1993Do do do! Who's at the door! I need to know! That was so cute! I loved it! Good thing Ron came to her rescue! :)
UPDATE VERY SOON!
Lots of love!
~Ashley~
10/9/2005 c1 4griffin14
Wouldn't Fred have moved out of the house by now? Some proofreading is needed, there are spellin and grammer mistakes and such. The story seems a little unoriginal and a little dull. The characters seem a little immature. Is Ron still worying about if Hermione "likes" him? Now, is it like-like or just like?
Maybe have him ponder this next. Sarcasm... in case you didn't get it. But keep writing, because the more you right, the better you get.
annie
4griffin14Wouldn't Fred have moved out of the house by now? Some proofreading is needed, there are spellin and grammer mistakes and such. The story seems a little unoriginal and a little dull. The characters seem a little immature. Is Ron still worying about if Hermione "likes" him? Now, is it like-like or just like?
Maybe have him ponder this next. Sarcasm... in case you didn't get it. But keep writing, because the more you right, the better you get.
annie
10/8/2005 c2 M.K. Slade
whe...
love it so far...please update soon
oh and i loved the lifting the bangs thing...very humorous
whe...
love it so far...please update soon
oh and i loved the lifting the bangs thing...very humorous
10/8/2005 c1 17Madame-S-Butterfly
It's good, and will lead up to a great story, but right now it's kind of dull. Something exciting needs to happen, to get the readers attention, even if it only lasts one chapter or isn't the major plot. Maybe something when they go to Diagon alley? ...Unless you've allready written it.
Madame Butterfly
17Madame-S-ButterflyIt's good, and will lead up to a great story, but right now it's kind of dull. Something exciting needs to happen, to get the readers attention, even if it only lasts one chapter or isn't the major plot. Maybe something when they go to Diagon alley? ...Unless you've allready written it.
Madame Butterfly