for Color Everywhere3/28/2007 c1 
77Danny Phantom SG-1
Aw! That was very sweet. Hermione and Ron are perfect for each other...they just don't always like to admit it *humpf*
There was just one problem that sort of distracted me (but it was a good story all the same). Make sure there are always "end quotes" when people are done talking. They were there most of the time, but the few times they weren't, my brain threatened to get confused! This is a very cute fic, though. Ron and Hermione forever!
-DPSG1
77Danny Phantom SG-1Aw! That was very sweet. Hermione and Ron are perfect for each other...they just don't always like to admit it *humpf*
There was just one problem that sort of distracted me (but it was a good story all the same). Make sure there are always "end quotes" when people are done talking. They were there most of the time, but the few times they weren't, my brain threatened to get confused! This is a very cute fic, though. Ron and Hermione forever!
-DPSG1
12/23/2005 c1 arsenal05
it a good story, but its too childy, it a good plot line, lift up the rating and write more.
it a good story, but its too childy, it a good plot line, lift up the rating and write more.
12/21/2005 c1 7squishy fluff
that was utterly sweet! loved it.. although the idea is simple, you made it more colorful through the dialogue and narration. it's really nice and i'm adding this to my fave stories list.. and hey, thanks for reviewing shyness is to blame! i know it's poorly done, but then, there's always a room for improvement.
i'll be expecting more from you! write more ron-herm stories.. you'll be a great writer.. thanks for everything! :)
7squishy fluffthat was utterly sweet! loved it.. although the idea is simple, you made it more colorful through the dialogue and narration. it's really nice and i'm adding this to my fave stories list.. and hey, thanks for reviewing shyness is to blame! i know it's poorly done, but then, there's always a room for improvement.
i'll be expecting more from you! write more ron-herm stories.. you'll be a great writer.. thanks for everything! :)
11/6/2005 c1 1angelicsorceres
BRAVO! BRAVO! that was wonderful m8. very much wonderful! except that i think you forgot to put the " on the end of the speech to seperate thespeech and the narration but you know you are better than me. Keep doing more stories. I'm excited to read your upcoming stories. I know you are a great writer so just go on. keep putting your ideas into a nice and magical stories. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
1angelicsorceresBRAVO! BRAVO! that was wonderful m8. very much wonderful! except that i think you forgot to put the " on the end of the speech to seperate thespeech and the narration but you know you are better than me. Keep doing more stories. I'm excited to read your upcoming stories. I know you are a great writer so just go on. keep putting your ideas into a nice and magical stories. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
11/3/2005 c1 2ngotskIthEgreaT
OMG! so sweet!.. really!..! you have a talent in writing.. do you know that? i love ronherm! it rocks! write more stories about them.. and i want a sequel! fast! k? gotta go! bye! ^^*
2ngotskIthEgreaTOMG! so sweet!.. really!..! you have a talent in writing.. do you know that? i love ronherm! it rocks! write more stories about them.. and i want a sequel! fast! k? gotta go! bye! ^^*
10/9/2005 c1 LunaCatt
Cute story! The writing's fairly good, though it's a little pet peeve of mine when you switch tenses like that...
Cute story! The writing's fairly good, though it's a little pet peeve of mine when you switch tenses like that...
10/9/2005 c1 13quidditch7
aw! i love ron/hermione stories,that was very cute! i'm glad you posted it :)
-quidditch7
13quidditch7aw! i love ron/hermione stories,that was very cute! i'm glad you posted it :)
-quidditch7