for Passerby in the Forest11/19/2005 c5 
5marauder4ever
aw! thatz a great ending! really cute^_^ i guess hitting your head can be good for you! i luved this story:)great job!
5marauder4everaw! thatz a great ending! really cute^_^ i guess hitting your head can be good for you! i luved this story:)great job!
11/14/2005 c4 97Bagge
The story started as a silly Lockhart-fic and now it is not silly at all... but I never noticed the clatch between the two kinds of stories. Maybe there even is no clatch. I think that is how it is, but I have no idea how you manage to write a story with such internal conflicts. As in the ward-scene you hre mixing silly and dead serious in a very, very good way.
They caught her. To Azkaban with the murderer! This is starting to feel like a nice little who-dun-it. Who was the (polyjuiced?) woman in Liverwort's office? How was the aurors alerted? Who was the young man? All conclusions in last chapter! All cred for you writing this fic, who I actually think is one of your best so far!
So you didn't find any Snorkack in Norway? Hah! Stupid Morwigians. Can't find themself the way out of a paper-bag without help (er... Förlåt alla Norrmän som läser detta). But frankly, you could wery well have recieved the same answer in Sweden. Most Swedish wizards put down the Snorkack as Quibler noncence, but I tell you, when Luna publishes her photos there will be a new tune to dance to! *Moahahahahaha* Er... sorry ;-) Good luck at Reykjavik
97BaggeThe story started as a silly Lockhart-fic and now it is not silly at all... but I never noticed the clatch between the two kinds of stories. Maybe there even is no clatch. I think that is how it is, but I have no idea how you manage to write a story with such internal conflicts. As in the ward-scene you hre mixing silly and dead serious in a very, very good way.
They caught her. To Azkaban with the murderer! This is starting to feel like a nice little who-dun-it. Who was the (polyjuiced?) woman in Liverwort's office? How was the aurors alerted? Who was the young man? All conclusions in last chapter! All cred for you writing this fic, who I actually think is one of your best so far!
So you didn't find any Snorkack in Norway? Hah! Stupid Morwigians. Can't find themself the way out of a paper-bag without help (er... Förlåt alla Norrmän som läser detta). But frankly, you could wery well have recieved the same answer in Sweden. Most Swedish wizards put down the Snorkack as Quibler noncence, but I tell you, when Luna publishes her photos there will be a new tune to dance to! *Moahahahahaha* Er... sorry ;-) Good luck at Reykjavik
11/13/2005 c4 4Queen of the Badgers
No!
The next will not be the last! Not when I've just discovered this story! I won't let it happen!
*looks around, pulls out chains and handcuffs from somewhere inside bag and chains self to your door*
And I'm not leaving until you post at least two more chapters!
And no!
Again.
Bellatrix can't be caught! She's - she's the evil person who's made Neville's life miserable and tortured his parents to insanity so that they barely recognise their own son anymore - it's an outrage!
Ahem. My two little rants over, I shall start speaking normally. Without *shudder* the abominable beings that are Exclamation Marks.
Despite Bellatrix being caught, and a little trickle of blood oozing from the poor guy's head, I do like this chapter.
And if the next will be the last...*sigh* as long as it's REALLY good, I won't mind.
Pf.
:(
QoB
4Queen of the BadgersNo!
The next will not be the last! Not when I've just discovered this story! I won't let it happen!
*looks around, pulls out chains and handcuffs from somewhere inside bag and chains self to your door*
And I'm not leaving until you post at least two more chapters!
And no!
Again.
Bellatrix can't be caught! She's - she's the evil person who's made Neville's life miserable and tortured his parents to insanity so that they barely recognise their own son anymore - it's an outrage!
Ahem. My two little rants over, I shall start speaking normally. Without *shudder* the abominable beings that are Exclamation Marks.
Despite Bellatrix being caught, and a little trickle of blood oozing from the poor guy's head, I do like this chapter.
And if the next will be the last...*sigh* as long as it's REALLY good, I won't mind.
Pf.
:(
QoB
11/13/2005 c3 Queen of the Badgers
Love the song. Really.
Mooses - meese - moose - wha?
I'll go with meese.
Meese don't get enough credit. They're adorable! I love them!
(The stupid people in the form room next to ours have a soft toy mascot - a brown fluffy moose. And I, and others - mainly my Greek class - have become very attached to it. So we were shocked to discover that the stupid people had written Moosey's SUICIDE NOTE on the board and were looking for offers to assist him with his suicidal jump out of a second floor window.
Shocking, I know.
And so me and one of my friends wrote them back a note saying - she wrote this - 'We love Moosey and will not let you kill him. That is cruel', and I wrote, ahem, 'You kill Moosey - We kill you. Love, the Greek class'.)
But why call Bellatrix...Bellabitch?
Sure, it's clever - and rather amusing - but I like Bellatrix, she's cool and evil. Even though she's a madwoman. Oh well.
QoB
Love the song. Really.
Mooses - meese - moose - wha?
I'll go with meese.
Meese don't get enough credit. They're adorable! I love them!
(The stupid people in the form room next to ours have a soft toy mascot - a brown fluffy moose. And I, and others - mainly my Greek class - have become very attached to it. So we were shocked to discover that the stupid people had written Moosey's SUICIDE NOTE on the board and were looking for offers to assist him with his suicidal jump out of a second floor window.
Shocking, I know.
And so me and one of my friends wrote them back a note saying - she wrote this - 'We love Moosey and will not let you kill him. That is cruel', and I wrote, ahem, 'You kill Moosey - We kill you. Love, the Greek class'.)
But why call Bellatrix...Bellabitch?
Sure, it's clever - and rather amusing - but I like Bellatrix, she's cool and evil. Even though she's a madwoman. Oh well.
QoB
11/13/2005 c2 Queen of the Badgers
Ooh...
Another, ahem, 'amusing, comical, convivial (eh?), entertaining, exhilarated, funny, gay (*snicker*), happy, humorous, jolly, jovial, joyous, merry, mirthful, rollicking (...), side-splitting, uproarious' chapter.
Whew.
I'd like to meet whoever invented the thesaurus and shake them by the hand.
And the plot is simply ingenious.
Oh - Quote-aholics Anonymous didn't work. I've reverted back to my old habit again.
'She and the Healer-in-Charge would be Apparating back to the Dark Lord faster than a fly could get to a chunk of rotting meat. Foolproof…foolproof…'
Yay!
Sorry, I just love that part.
QoB
Ooh...
Another, ahem, 'amusing, comical, convivial (eh?), entertaining, exhilarated, funny, gay (*snicker*), happy, humorous, jolly, jovial, joyous, merry, mirthful, rollicking (...), side-splitting, uproarious' chapter.
Whew.
I'd like to meet whoever invented the thesaurus and shake them by the hand.
And the plot is simply ingenious.
Oh - Quote-aholics Anonymous didn't work. I've reverted back to my old habit again.
'She and the Healer-in-Charge would be Apparating back to the Dark Lord faster than a fly could get to a chunk of rotting meat. Foolproof…foolproof…'
Yay!
Sorry, I just love that part.
QoB
11/13/2005 c1 Queen of the Badgers
'“C’mon, Miss Hormone! Dance, dance, dance, dance, dance—!”'
Ahahahahahaha!
A hilarious beginning to a story...I personally wouldn't have had a clue about what to write for that challenge.
And now I'm off - to read (and review :D ) more chapters.
Ta-ta for now!
QoB
'“C’mon, Miss Hormone! Dance, dance, dance, dance, dance—!”'
Ahahahahahaha!
A hilarious beginning to a story...I personally wouldn't have had a clue about what to write for that challenge.
And now I'm off - to read (and review :D ) more chapters.
Ta-ta for now!
QoB
11/12/2005 c4 9Dead-Luthien
sob, sob, sniff, sob. I think this says a lot. Poor, innocent Bella (yeah right, if she's innocent then I'm Miss world 2005, and I'm not)she just wated to bring a present for her Master's birthday but those ugly, mean Aurors ruined everything. I hope she'll receive as a forgive-us present from those Aurors, a very long holiday (maybe for the rest of her life) at Azkaban. Although I think that 10 years with Lockart are better.(Evil grin)
Anyway, I liked the chapter and I can't wait for a new update. Bye
9Dead-Luthiensob, sob, sniff, sob. I think this says a lot. Poor, innocent Bella (yeah right, if she's innocent then I'm Miss world 2005, and I'm not)she just wated to bring a present for her Master's birthday but those ugly, mean Aurors ruined everything. I hope she'll receive as a forgive-us present from those Aurors, a very long holiday (maybe for the rest of her life) at Azkaban. Although I think that 10 years with Lockart are better.(Evil grin)
Anyway, I liked the chapter and I can't wait for a new update. Bye
11/12/2005 c4 5marauder4ever
haha! bella got caught! serves her right, stupid death eater, i cant wait to hear the next chapter!
P.S. im planning to write an epilogue for "The Chocolate Hunt" about what happend to Ronald McDonald in the chamber of secrets. hehe
5marauder4everhaha! bella got caught! serves her right, stupid death eater, i cant wait to hear the next chapter!
P.S. im planning to write an epilogue for "The Chocolate Hunt" about what happend to Ronald McDonald in the chamber of secrets. hehe
11/8/2005 c3 97Bagge
A... strange chapter. Strange in a very good way. I can think of very few things as silly as Bella and Lockhart dancing around, singing the moose-song. But then we see the Longbottoms and remember that their fate is one of the most sad imaginable. And still these two scenes do not clatch in the least. Lockhart is not silly because the autor is bored - he is silly due to a brain damage (and his own good nature). Just another night at St Mungos, I suppose. But I can feel it in my heart. As you have written somewhere, you are a comedy girl (in your writing that is), but as all really good clown knows, all good comedies have a hint of tragedy in it.
"I am not a sadist. "Of course not, dear" - ;-)
Given your views on same-sex pairings (and trout) you are very brave indeed to read Xena-fics, Deb-lil... I maybe should have warned you about those ;-) But having read about my dirty-minded boys you have actually gone through the worst I have to offer (but if you ever find a translator you might want to step lightly on some of the swedish fics...). Nevertheless, I am both flattered and thankful for you actually finishing the fic and giving me such a nice review.
Oh dear. Seems like I have done it again - promising a review but instead babbling about my own stuff. It would be so nice if this site had some kind of guestbook function or anything like that. Now I shall stop pestering you for the moment and go back to fanfic-space.
/BAGGE
97BaggeA... strange chapter. Strange in a very good way. I can think of very few things as silly as Bella and Lockhart dancing around, singing the moose-song. But then we see the Longbottoms and remember that their fate is one of the most sad imaginable. And still these two scenes do not clatch in the least. Lockhart is not silly because the autor is bored - he is silly due to a brain damage (and his own good nature). Just another night at St Mungos, I suppose. But I can feel it in my heart. As you have written somewhere, you are a comedy girl (in your writing that is), but as all really good clown knows, all good comedies have a hint of tragedy in it.
"I am not a sadist. "Of course not, dear" - ;-)
Given your views on same-sex pairings (and trout) you are very brave indeed to read Xena-fics, Deb-lil... I maybe should have warned you about those ;-) But having read about my dirty-minded boys you have actually gone through the worst I have to offer (but if you ever find a translator you might want to step lightly on some of the swedish fics...). Nevertheless, I am both flattered and thankful for you actually finishing the fic and giving me such a nice review.
Oh dear. Seems like I have done it again - promising a review but instead babbling about my own stuff. It would be so nice if this site had some kind of guestbook function or anything like that. Now I shall stop pestering you for the moment and go back to fanfic-space.
/BAGGE
11/6/2005 c3 5marauder4ever
lol that was hilarius! i learned the moose song when i went to camp a few years ago, we sang it to annoy people!lol uh oh bella has a wand now that aint good! great story it rox!
5marauder4everlol that was hilarius! i learned the moose song when i went to camp a few years ago, we sang it to annoy people!lol uh oh bella has a wand now that aint good! great story it rox!
11/6/2005 c3 Slim Shady
Hey, I'm too lazy to sign in. Nice moose thing! It was hilarious! Did you make it up yourself?
Hey, I'm too lazy to sign in. Nice moose thing! It was hilarious! Did you make it up yourself?
11/6/2005 c3 9Dead-Luthien
The singing part was crazy but the last part with D'Art was hilarious! I can't stop laughing. I have tears in my eyes and because of this I found difficult to write beacuse I can't see the letters. Anyway, I maneged to save your candies and I'll sent them back to you by post as soon as I have some money.(I don't trust D'Art to do this.) Anyway I hope you'll be glad at hearing that he won't receive any cookies for a week. Muahahaha! (Chocking) I should stop doing the evil laugh. I always choke after it. Oh, I almost forgot. I loved the part with your dream about D'Art and I look forward in seeing you again. Right now I'm looking for a pub or something like that where owls are not alowed to enter and where we can eat as many sweets as we want.:P
P.S I'll update soon, or at least I hope so.
9Dead-LuthienThe singing part was crazy but the last part with D'Art was hilarious! I can't stop laughing. I have tears in my eyes and because of this I found difficult to write beacuse I can't see the letters. Anyway, I maneged to save your candies and I'll sent them back to you by post as soon as I have some money.(I don't trust D'Art to do this.) Anyway I hope you'll be glad at hearing that he won't receive any cookies for a week. Muahahaha! (Chocking) I should stop doing the evil laugh. I always choke after it. Oh, I almost forgot. I loved the part with your dream about D'Art and I look forward in seeing you again. Right now I'm looking for a pub or something like that where owls are not alowed to enter and where we can eat as many sweets as we want.:P
P.S I'll update soon, or at least I hope so.
10/20/2005 c2 97Bagge
Wow! I really like the way you descibes Lockhart. Just as empty and good-natured as we see him in st Mungos in the book. He is a nice chap, doing what he likes the best. And he DOES know his colors. Belarix's whining "Oh, lord this is impossible... Ha! You make it all to easy..." is on the spot too. All in all, it feels like just another day at St Mungos. And as usual when you write, really funny.
97BaggeWow! I really like the way you descibes Lockhart. Just as empty and good-natured as we see him in st Mungos in the book. He is a nice chap, doing what he likes the best. And he DOES know his colors. Belarix's whining "Oh, lord this is impossible... Ha! You make it all to easy..." is on the spot too. All in all, it feels like just another day at St Mungos. And as usual when you write, really funny.
10/16/2005 c2 QuidditchMoke
you're continuing this upon my request? wow. cool.
So, it's going absolutely fabulous, innit? I'm loving this plot, truly am. Something about the obscure characters coming together in the beginning just set it up completely for the perfect intriguing story. Bravo.
Proma
P.S. THANK YOU so much for reviewing (and complimenting) my other stories. Crap stories sort of...well, I shouldn't say that since I enjoyed writing them, but there's so much I need to fix with Harry Potter and me. I can think of at least four chapters that make me feel sick and I want to re write...
Okay that was a bad review. Better next time, I promise.
you're continuing this upon my request? wow. cool.
So, it's going absolutely fabulous, innit? I'm loving this plot, truly am. Something about the obscure characters coming together in the beginning just set it up completely for the perfect intriguing story. Bravo.
Proma
P.S. THANK YOU so much for reviewing (and complimenting) my other stories. Crap stories sort of...well, I shouldn't say that since I enjoyed writing them, but there's so much I need to fix with Harry Potter and me. I can think of at least four chapters that make me feel sick and I want to re write...
Okay that was a bad review. Better next time, I promise.