3/22/2006 c12 7Simply Cynical
The end seemed kind of abrupt, but maybe that's just me?

I liked it other wise tho.

3/17/2006 c12 2Ammarice
the whole ending seemed really anti-climactic or something... just like there's this build up, this huge fight, kidnapping, something similar to attempted murder... and then suddenly rory is like "hmm i like logan" they make up based on almost nothing and everyone lives happily ever after... i guess i can't really think of anything else i might have done, but it seemed almost like you just wanted this over, so you just had them make up and had everyone live happily ever after...

3/14/2006 c12 11KeitaWolf
The ending seemed a little rushed, but then again that's a lot of ground to cover :P

I loved it!

Awesome work! This story rocked!

3/14/2006 c12 3spinaround
Hey, great chapter!

3/14/2006 c12 4lackinglime123
it was a good ending i can't wait to see what you come up with next

3/14/2006 c12 16Hopes2High
That was a great story! I loved it =)

3/14/2006 c12 1princetongirl
loved it update soon

3/12/2006 c11 4another stars hollow freak
i really like this please update it soon! and i hope they work it out or something i love them together!