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8/3/2020 c1 lschierer
I wonder where you would have gone with this one. It seems rather that this Dumbledore, unlike the one you have in NoFP, is an evil one. That would make for a really different dynamic, and I'd like to see what you do with it.
10/4/2019 c1 Numbet1ebaystoregmail
4/25/2019 c1 10qwerty19
What happened to Harry?
8/21/2018 c1 Guest
Is this a one-shot or...?
If not, you've done an amazing job so far!
If yes, then you need to post a sequel at the very least!
Tiffany Smithi (aka Tiffany Smith)
6/8/2018 c1 2a-modern-major-general
That last line...holy shit.
1/21/2018 c1 nicole.howe.737
I know it's been a while but pretty please for more! That's a cruel cliffhanger to leave us with!
1/20/2018 c1 NWFairyGodmother
Hi I don't know if you receive, or even want to receive, reviews from people on stories that you have had published so long ago, but I am pretty new to this so I'm going to throw my twenty seven cents into the mix (inflation and all that lol) so far I have read a few stories on this site and your "nightmares"'was the first story I ever read in the whole world of writing being done by fans that are people just like, well, other people. I am amazed at the talent I have seen shown by so many people that have sent in stories but I so far have picked two favorites. You are definitely going to be the writer setting the bar for others to live up to... Or at least they can try. When I read the last line in this story I was so startled I actually jerked back away from my tablet and almost dropped the damned thing. I have laughed or cried or even yelled out at characters but I have never jumped like I just did when I read that. OMG I always thought the " i fell out of my chair " was just a figure of speech but you taught me it isn't. Not even j.k. 'herownself
5/6/2017 c1 4GinnyPotter6891
Great beginning...
6/5/2016 c1 starluck
this is a gem
2/25/2016 c1 Dyla Sachi
Is it voldemort in dumbledore body?
2/13/2016 c1 phoebuscat
Hah! I always suspected Dumbles as being capable of doing -anything- to ensure his own survival and power base!
12/7/2015 c1 53Enigmaticrose4
Wow, what a place to leave a story hanging for ten years. Unless it was meant to end there, but you didn't mark it as complete.
10/17/2015 c1 16Knifez
Hot damn, that last line.

Not enough for a favorite, but it would be seriously cool if you decided to continue this.
9/10/2015 c1 jcampbellohten
Umm... That's ambiguous, because it says "Chapter 1" at the top, implying more than one chapter, and it doesn't say "Completed" in the details bar. Is he a greater evil who set them up, as seems strongly implied, or does he just know something she doesn't about the trio being alive and is satisfied they succeeded?
4/15/2015 c1 noloyolo
Why's he smiling!?
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