for A Thousand Paper Cranes2/14/2009 c5 chelsey
I really LOVE this story. Benny and elaine personalities are coming through very well. I'd like to see them a little older. And if we could get a little more in benny's mind I would love it. But regardless hisbis a fantastic story! Good work!
I really LOVE this story. Benny and elaine personalities are coming through very well. I'd like to see them a little older. And if we could get a little more in benny's mind I would love it. But regardless hisbis a fantastic story! Good work!
2/12/2009 c4 
5beautyqueen321
Another lovely chapter. I am so excited to read more about this. You make the characters so real. I have a hard time doing that with my own stories. I think you're doing a great job, I like this version better than the others so far for sure. The time travel thing would have been interesting, but I just know I'm going to like this better. Please don't give up on this version, it's my favorite thus far. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest!
5beautyqueen321Another lovely chapter. I am so excited to read more about this. You make the characters so real. I have a hard time doing that with my own stories. I think you're doing a great job, I like this version better than the others so far for sure. The time travel thing would have been interesting, but I just know I'm going to like this better. Please don't give up on this version, it's my favorite thus far. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest!
11/25/2008 c4 62metacognitive
Great, I really love the way you describe things.
And thanks for the review!
62metacognitiveGreat, I really love the way you describe things.
And thanks for the review!
11/9/2008 c3 iloveher
Your writing voice is just absolutely amazing. I wish I could write something like this but I'm afraid that I'd grow impatient and rush my story. Keep up your hardwork. And maybe I'll make my own 10 paper cranes and make a wish with all my might. But then the wish might be quite hard to make.
Your writing voice is just absolutely amazing. I wish I could write something like this but I'm afraid that I'd grow impatient and rush my story. Keep up your hardwork. And maybe I'll make my own 10 paper cranes and make a wish with all my might. But then the wish might be quite hard to make.
5/31/2008 c2 RaesYourVoice
Wowzz I really really luv this story! Pleez Make the next chapter. Im still wondering how the girl died (at least thatz wut u make it sound like but idk). Man I really wanna kno.
P.S. I luv the descriptionz in chapter one, they were really deep, i culd tell u used alot of thought.
Wowzz I really really luv this story! Pleez Make the next chapter. Im still wondering how the girl died (at least thatz wut u make it sound like but idk). Man I really wanna kno.
P.S. I luv the descriptionz in chapter one, they were really deep, i culd tell u used alot of thought.
8/4/2007 c2 deadly-bliss
Haha, true, you CAN`T get pregnant from kissing, but one thing leads to another...
Anyway, you are an awesome writer/author whichever you prefer! Also, when are you going to update?
Haha, true, you CAN`T get pregnant from kissing, but one thing leads to another...
Anyway, you are an awesome writer/author whichever you prefer! Also, when are you going to update?
8/4/2007 c1 deadly-bliss
Aww! The intro`s so cute! I just love mushy things! I can`t wait to find out what the girl`s like, and what happened!
Aww! The intro`s so cute! I just love mushy things! I can`t wait to find out what the girl`s like, and what happened!
5/5/2007 c2 1The Pink Anchor
I love this! And I was dying laughing about the pregnant thing, mostly because I saw the movie it was in :)
1The Pink AnchorI love this! And I was dying laughing about the pregnant thing, mostly because I saw the movie it was in :)
4/30/2007 c2 1Marshmalu
Haha i love the pregnant convo...Very funny! even though itdid take 5 months, the 1st chappie was amazing so don't worry! Again, you are an amazing writer
.:Malu:.
1MarshmaluHaha i love the pregnant convo...Very funny! even though itdid take 5 months, the 1st chappie was amazing so don't worry! Again, you are an amazing writer
.:Malu:.
4/30/2007 c2 JoBroFan4Life
I love this fic. In my opinion, your one of the best writers on the sandlot section.Thank you for the advice. I will definetly watch that.
I love this fic. In my opinion, your one of the best writers on the sandlot section.Thank you for the advice. I will definetly watch that.