for A Thousand Paper Cranes10/9/2006 c1 
2Skyriia
I LOVE THIS STORY! And I agree all oc's are Mary Sues you just cant help it. Please PLEASE write more soon i beg of you!
2SkyriiaI LOVE THIS STORY! And I agree all oc's are Mary Sues you just cant help it. Please PLEASE write more soon i beg of you!
3/26/2006 c2 3chelky
hey this story is amazing i read a story before this one and it had so many spelling errors but your story is so perfect and detailed. i hope you review soon
3chelkyhey this story is amazing i read a story before this one and it had so many spelling errors but your story is so perfect and detailed. i hope you review soon
12/31/2005 c4 BehindMyEyes
I love your story! I've looked all around for a good Sandlot fanfic and I can't believe I finally found it! I can't wait for that chapter on Alyssa's feelings you mentioned trying in a review response. For some reason, I can't get your website to work. :( Oh well, I'll just have to wait until you post here. Keep up the terrific work!
I love your story! I've looked all around for a good Sandlot fanfic and I can't believe I finally found it! I can't wait for that chapter on Alyssa's feelings you mentioned trying in a review response. For some reason, I can't get your website to work. :( Oh well, I'll just have to wait until you post here. Keep up the terrific work!
11/24/2005 c3 8Xx.PefectlyxImperfectXx
Aw, just by the sound of Benny and Alyssa being together is cute to me anyways I really like your story I hope you update it soon
8Xx.PefectlyxImperfectXxAw, just by the sound of Benny and Alyssa being together is cute to me anyways I really like your story I hope you update it soon
11/17/2005 c4 3thebeebeegun
Well, I'm glad it made you feel good! LOL! And I really do like this story! The couple is adorable! Well, I'll still be waiting when you come back to finish the story! Hopefully that won't be too long off. Well, toodles!
-Brittany
3thebeebeegunWell, I'm glad it made you feel good! LOL! And I really do like this story! The couple is adorable! Well, I'll still be waiting when you come back to finish the story! Hopefully that won't be too long off. Well, toodles!
-Brittany
11/16/2005 c3 The Jet's Bomb
Hey! Totally awesome story...the ONLY realy good Sandlot story I've read for a LONG time. Hope you are proud, for you should be, it's very nicely written. I was suprised. You are very talented. I hope you continue & update quickly. Thanks for this great piece of work. Much Love To You~
Hey! Totally awesome story...the ONLY realy good Sandlot story I've read for a LONG time. Hope you are proud, for you should be, it's very nicely written. I was suprised. You are very talented. I hope you continue & update quickly. Thanks for this great piece of work. Much Love To You~