for Who I Am Hates Who I've Been1/22/2009 c6 cion
FINALLY! A good story that'll keep me reading. Actually, I was about to write something similar to this... except, not as similar... So close, yet so far away... Does that even make sense? I would've reviewed earlier, but I was too hooked to stop. Even though this story is concluded, you SHOULDVE recieved MORE than 50 reviews. I loved every chapter and I'm sure I'll love the others.
FINALLY! A good story that'll keep me reading. Actually, I was about to write something similar to this... except, not as similar... So close, yet so far away... Does that even make sense? I would've reviewed earlier, but I was too hooked to stop. Even though this story is concluded, you SHOULDVE recieved MORE than 50 reviews. I loved every chapter and I'm sure I'll love the others.
8/12/2006 c12 
2PEROXIDE
Reliant K is christian. that is cool...lol...cool
this was a cool story too
lol
be seein' ya
PEROXIDE
2PEROXIDEReliant K is christian. that is cool...lol...cool
this was a cool story too
lol
be seein' ya
PEROXIDE
3/15/2006 c12 25My Brighter Darkness
I love that song and that Band is the best! really good story I loved it.
25My Brighter DarknessI love that song and that Band is the best! really good story I loved it.
2/8/2006 c12 24AmandaTheVampireLove
Whew, I just sat down and read this all at one go! It was wonderful! I'm extremely pleased with it, and I'm going to go and see if there is a wonderful sequel up right now or not. (there better be, or I'll sick jackson on you...)
24AmandaTheVampireLoveWhew, I just sat down and read this all at one go! It was wonderful! I'm extremely pleased with it, and I'm going to go and see if there is a wonderful sequel up right now or not. (there better be, or I'll sick jackson on you...)
1/14/2006 c12 1Pale-Spaz101
Just spent the last couple of hours reading this story (and taking a break to make my mom's birthday card, but that's another story). I greatly enjoyed it, and don't think you were as out of character as you thought you were. If they had that past, I can realistically see them reacting that way to everything that happened. Other than that, I loved the plot, too. It's rare to find a story that balances a well written suspense/thriller plot and a romance without focusing too much on either. In any case, I really liked it and look forward to reading the sequel soon!
1Pale-Spaz101Just spent the last couple of hours reading this story (and taking a break to make my mom's birthday card, but that's another story). I greatly enjoyed it, and don't think you were as out of character as you thought you were. If they had that past, I can realistically see them reacting that way to everything that happened. Other than that, I loved the plot, too. It's rare to find a story that balances a well written suspense/thriller plot and a romance without focusing too much on either. In any case, I really liked it and look forward to reading the sequel soon!
12/22/2005 c12 Alice in June
I like this story and I did enjoy reading it :). I don't think the ending was rushed, the fic was paced well enough.
The rape scene was everything it was supposed to be- disturbing, dark, disgusting and horrifying. I think along with the one in Proxy, it was portrayed the way it should have been (I hope I didn't sound sick).
On a lighter note, I loved the LJ and Jaden is such a cutie . Bet he'll turn out to be just like his dad. He is really a good mixture of all of his parents' good qualities.
Any OOC in the fic is understandable since they had a past. The chapter was great and I think it tied loose endings. I feel fuzzy inside.
Anywho, if you don't get to writing a sequel at least write a oneshot, it would be nice :). Keep up the good work!
I like this story and I did enjoy reading it :). I don't think the ending was rushed, the fic was paced well enough.
The rape scene was everything it was supposed to be- disturbing, dark, disgusting and horrifying. I think along with the one in Proxy, it was portrayed the way it should have been (I hope I didn't sound sick).
On a lighter note, I loved the LJ and Jaden is such a cutie . Bet he'll turn out to be just like his dad. He is really a good mixture of all of his parents' good qualities.
Any OOC in the fic is understandable since they had a past. The chapter was great and I think it tied loose endings. I feel fuzzy inside.
Anywho, if you don't get to writing a sequel at least write a oneshot, it would be nice :). Keep up the good work!
11/29/2005 c1 5Malik's Princess
hey hon!
I don't know what Red Eye really is...but this story is cool! I thought I'd give you a sweet little review to say you rock!
Keep writing hon!
And thanks for the review! Much loved! *hugs*
Love Roz xoxoxo
5Malik's Princesshey hon!
I don't know what Red Eye really is...but this story is cool! I thought I'd give you a sweet little review to say you rock!
Keep writing hon!
And thanks for the review! Much loved! *hugs*
Love Roz xoxoxo
11/25/2005 c12 74BregoBeauty
Awesome ending! I'm going to miss this story *eyes tear*! Please write a sequel soon! :)
74BregoBeautyAwesome ending! I'm going to miss this story *eyes tear*! Please write a sequel soon! :)
11/21/2005 c11 BregoBeauty
Awesome chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next with Jackson's uncle. I feel so bad for Lisa after reading about her rape. It's no wonder that an event such as that would change a person. Great job with explaining such a topic. Please update soon! :)
Awesome chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next with Jackson's uncle. I feel so bad for Lisa after reading about her rape. It's no wonder that an event such as that would change a person. Great job with explaining such a topic. Please update soon! :)
11/10/2005 c10 7PhantomPirate7
Wow! I can't wait to see what happens..what Jackson & Lisa are going to do to get his ex-co workers off their back..looking forward to the next part! :)
7PhantomPirate7Wow! I can't wait to see what happens..what Jackson & Lisa are going to do to get his ex-co workers off their back..looking forward to the next part! :)