for Scooby Doo goes to LA12/28/2012 c2 Roxanne
:D
:D
12/28/2012 c1 Roxanne
I really like the idea of Velma being pregnant. But I really love the idea of Shaggy and Daphne as a couple. I really like the sentence when he fainted, I'd probably faint too.
I really like the idea of Velma being pregnant. But I really love the idea of Shaggy and Daphne as a couple. I really like the sentence when he fainted, I'd probably faint too.
11/1/2012 c2 Guest
good
good
412/10/2005 c8 Harry M. C
Aw... Shaggy and Velma have a baby now! It was a nice fic. I like crossovers. You should write more.
Aw... Shaggy and Velma have a baby now! It was a nice fic. I like crossovers. You should write more.
11/17/2005 c8 I love Scooby
It was such a cute fanfic. I like ShagVel pairing too. Please write more.
It was such a cute fanfic. I like ShagVel pairing too. Please write more.
11/4/2005 c8 Lucy
That was a cute story.
I liked it.
Keep up the good work!
That was a cute story.
I liked it.
Keep up the good work!
11/2/2005 c8 Girl-in-a-dream-world
Oh, my God! The last two chapters were wonderful! I especially liked the last chpater. It was so cute! I liked the way Velma's pupils got worried about her and asked questions about the baby, and also in this chapter the baby was born at last (Romana is a cute name). The part Mrs Rogers talked about Shaggy's childhood made me laugh, :D and I also liked it that you finished the story with an unanswered question.
I don't why, but I felt a little pity for Belial. I know she was wicked but I think she fell victim to the spell going wrong. All she wanted to be was 'beautiful'.
I really enjoyed reading your story. It was very interesting. It's a pity that the fic's finished. I hope you start writing your other SD story soon.
See you next fanfic! Good luck! :D
Oh, my God! The last two chapters were wonderful! I especially liked the last chpater. It was so cute! I liked the way Velma's pupils got worried about her and asked questions about the baby, and also in this chapter the baby was born at last (Romana is a cute name). The part Mrs Rogers talked about Shaggy's childhood made me laugh, :D and I also liked it that you finished the story with an unanswered question.
I don't why, but I felt a little pity for Belial. I know she was wicked but I think she fell victim to the spell going wrong. All she wanted to be was 'beautiful'.
I really enjoyed reading your story. It was very interesting. It's a pity that the fic's finished. I hope you start writing your other SD story soon.
See you next fanfic! Good luck! :D
11/2/2005 c6 Girl-in-a-dream-world
Hi, my dear Seiryuu-san ;D
I thought you had added a new chapter, but I see you’ve made little changes to chapter 6. I think it was obvious that the beginning of the old chapter was in Velma’s POV-and I even said that I liked it- but it’s O.k. You made it clearer.
As I told you before, I have not watched Angel. Yet I feel he could have a bigger part in the story. I don’t know if he has any special powers, but if he does, maybe he can use them to help the captured girls! And maybe in a flashback, you can tell us more about his motivations for helping the gang and the girls.
I don’t know much about Angel. Maybe that’s why these suggestions and questions come to me! Of course that doesn’t stop me from enjoying reading this nice fic. Please post chapter seven very soon. I NEED to know what happens next!
Hey! Thanks for enabling the anonymous reviews section. It's very good for people like me who most of the times are too lazy to log in ! LOL! See you later. :) :D
Hi, my dear Seiryuu-san ;D
I thought you had added a new chapter, but I see you’ve made little changes to chapter 6. I think it was obvious that the beginning of the old chapter was in Velma’s POV-and I even said that I liked it- but it’s O.k. You made it clearer.
As I told you before, I have not watched Angel. Yet I feel he could have a bigger part in the story. I don’t know if he has any special powers, but if he does, maybe he can use them to help the captured girls! And maybe in a flashback, you can tell us more about his motivations for helping the gang and the girls.
I don’t know much about Angel. Maybe that’s why these suggestions and questions come to me! Of course that doesn’t stop me from enjoying reading this nice fic. Please post chapter seven very soon. I NEED to know what happens next!
Hey! Thanks for enabling the anonymous reviews section. It's very good for people like me who most of the times are too lazy to log in ! LOL! See you later. :) :D
10/28/2005 c6 xxClosed Accountxx
*heaves a sigh of relief* Oh, thank goodness! They found Velma and they are about to save her! I liked your adding some Velma's POV although I think it could have been a bit longer and with more details. Still it was good to know how Velma and the girls were doing.
and that Balial really ate some of the girls? Oh, My! I think the baby saved her mother's life even before it was born! Now I'll be waiting to find out how the gang will destroy that she monster.
Please update soon! *hugs Brigitte back* !
*heaves a sigh of relief* Oh, thank goodness! They found Velma and they are about to save her! I liked your adding some Velma's POV although I think it could have been a bit longer and with more details. Still it was good to know how Velma and the girls were doing.
and that Balial really ate some of the girls? Oh, My! I think the baby saved her mother's life even before it was born! Now I'll be waiting to find out how the gang will destroy that she monster.
Please update soon! *hugs Brigitte back* !
10/24/2005 c5 xxClosed Accountxx
You're wonderful! You put up two chapters at the same time! The story is getting really exciting. I still feel bad about Velma. I hope she is O.k. At first, I was waiting for you to write some Velma's POV too, but then I thought it would be better not to know what Velma was doing yet. That way, we share Shaggy, Daphne and Fred's anxiety and worries about Velma, but it's your story and you sure know how to handle it.
(and I see you have mentioned a part of my story in yours. Wow, thanks! I don't know if my story was worthy of it. :D :)
Don't rush the story. Put chapter 6 up only when the writer's block is completely over! :D
You're wonderful! You put up two chapters at the same time! The story is getting really exciting. I still feel bad about Velma. I hope she is O.k. At first, I was waiting for you to write some Velma's POV too, but then I thought it would be better not to know what Velma was doing yet. That way, we share Shaggy, Daphne and Fred's anxiety and worries about Velma, but it's your story and you sure know how to handle it.
(and I see you have mentioned a part of my story in yours. Wow, thanks! I don't know if my story was worthy of it. :D :)
Don't rush the story. Put chapter 6 up only when the writer's block is completely over! :D
10/24/2005 c3 xxClosed Accountxx
Oh, poor Velma! I hope no harm will come to her (especially now that she is pregnant!) or to any of the other kidnapped girls. It seems that Angel knows things and wants to help the gang.It's good that the gang is not alone in solving this mystery.
I'm waiting for chapter 4. Please update soon! :)
Oh, poor Velma! I hope no harm will come to her (especially now that she is pregnant!) or to any of the other kidnapped girls. It seems that Angel knows things and wants to help the gang.It's good that the gang is not alone in solving this mystery.
I'm waiting for chapter 4. Please update soon! :)
10/21/2005 c2 xxClosed Accountxx
I'm happy you updated so soon. Great second chapter! I think that Belial is gonna get Velma, right? Please update as soon as you can. I really want to know what happens next. :D :)
I'm happy you updated so soon. Great second chapter! I think that Belial is gonna get Velma, right? Please update as soon as you can. I really want to know what happens next. :D :)
10/17/2005 c1 xxClosed Accountxx
Hurray, your story is up! I enjoyed reading the first chapter. I love the idea of Shaggy and Velma having a baby. I think they make great parents. :D There aren't many stories on SD section to show Velma and Shaggy as a married couple waiting for a baby, but your are doing it at alst! Please update soon. I'm dying to know who's gonna kidnap Velma and how Shaggy and the rest of the gang are going to save her.
By the way, I think you'd better accept anonymous reviews too, so that you can get more reviews. Good luck!
Hurray, your story is up! I enjoyed reading the first chapter. I love the idea of Shaggy and Velma having a baby. I think they make great parents. :D There aren't many stories on SD section to show Velma and Shaggy as a married couple waiting for a baby, but your are doing it at alst! Please update soon. I'm dying to know who's gonna kidnap Velma and how Shaggy and the rest of the gang are going to save her.
By the way, I think you'd better accept anonymous reviews too, so that you can get more reviews. Good luck!