
5/19/2013 c6 BOB
Cheesy...
Cheesy...
8/29/2010 c2 yiyi
i loved it
i loved it
6/13/2010 c3 Seriously
Yep, this is the worst story ever. Even amateurs should write better than that! You remind me of a dumb blond
Yep, this is the worst story ever. Even amateurs should write better than that! You remind me of a dumb blond
8/16/2008 c8 donkeysback
uh...i dont know what a flame is, but if it means saying ur work is bad...mabey i would want to flame u
uh...i dont know what a flame is, but if it means saying ur work is bad...mabey i would want to flame u
8/16/2008 c2 finlea
that was a little abrupt. besides, you could do something else then naruto's signature move
that was a little abrupt. besides, you could do something else then naruto's signature move
8/16/2008 c1 finlea
well, could u make longer chapters?
well, could u make longer chapters?
3/20/2008 c8
17Kur-Kag88
I really loved it, even thought it was alittle OOC. But anyways I love SakuraSasuke Pairing's and yours was wonderful.

I really loved it, even thought it was alittle OOC. But anyways I love SakuraSasuke Pairing's and yours was wonderful.
3/1/2008 c3
5Perfect love kills all fear
so short! i'm sorry i know i am mean but really this chapters are short, um i like your fanfic so far and i can't wait to read the next chapter. (I'm turning 14 in exactly 4 months, i know that that was really random but i just figured it out and i just had to type it somewhere)

so short! i'm sorry i know i am mean but really this chapters are short, um i like your fanfic so far and i can't wait to read the next chapter. (I'm turning 14 in exactly 4 months, i know that that was really random but i just figured it out and i just had to type it somewhere)
3/1/2008 c1 Perfect love kills all fear
i like how poetic (is that a word?) it sounds i can't wait to read the next chapter.
i like how poetic (is that a word?) it sounds i can't wait to read the next chapter.
3/1/2008 c8 Perfect love kills all fear
i can't believe you killed him but i guess i will have to find out what happens in the sequel so i will read that after my review.
i can't believe you killed him but i guess i will have to find out what happens in the sequel so i will read that after my review.
3/1/2008 c5 Perfect love kills all fear
i like your story so far. i really like your poems at the begining of each chapter they are really good. did you write them? i looked at your profile and saw you like Twilight book series, i just finished the first book and now i have to borrow the second book. i love the book too. i can't wait to find out if Bella turns into a vampire, i guess you would already know that if you read those 3, i learned last night at the bookstore at the mall that there is going to be a 4th book coming out later this year. Anyways i like your fanfic like i said before even though the chapter are short it is pretty good i am writing a fanfic sort of like yours about sasuke and sakura seeing each other after so long i hope my story can be as good as yours.
i like your story so far. i really like your poems at the begining of each chapter they are really good. did you write them? i looked at your profile and saw you like Twilight book series, i just finished the first book and now i have to borrow the second book. i love the book too. i can't wait to find out if Bella turns into a vampire, i guess you would already know that if you read those 3, i learned last night at the bookstore at the mall that there is going to be a 4th book coming out later this year. Anyways i like your fanfic like i said before even though the chapter are short it is pretty good i am writing a fanfic sort of like yours about sasuke and sakura seeing each other after so long i hope my story can be as good as yours.
12/15/2007 c8 crystalsxy
WAH! SO SAD! Y DOES SASUKE HAVE TO DIE! POOR SASUSAKU! dis is an awesome fic...!
WAH! SO SAD! Y DOES SASUKE HAVE TO DIE! POOR SASUSAKU! dis is an awesome fic...!
11/22/2006 c8 kee-chan
cry.
im crying.
im crying.
im going to kill neji and naruto.
-naruto and neji- get the hell away from us.
-kee-chan- die you assholes!
hahaha.
cry.
im crying.
im crying.
im going to kill neji and naruto.
-naruto and neji- get the hell away from us.
-kee-chan- die you assholes!
hahaha.
7/29/2006 c3 Midnight
ok i have atip try to make the chapters longer ok? i know it takes more time but it makes everything worthwhile. so let me go and read more
your fan
Midnight
ok i have atip try to make the chapters longer ok? i know it takes more time but it makes everything worthwhile. so let me go and read more
your fan
Midnight
7/29/2006 c2 Midnight
aw... that was sweet! oh and by the way whats an anbu? i never did find out in the show... oh well i guess ill fing out later... ok let me go now so i can read more then rate your story.
your fan
Midnight
aw... that was sweet! oh and by the way whats an anbu? i never did find out in the show... oh well i guess ill fing out later... ok let me go now so i can read more then rate your story.
your fan
Midnight