
1/29/2006 c2
9GGluvr1987
SOO sorry it took me long to review, I've been out of town. Anyways, I LOVED this chapter! You are crazy about the trory action because I thought it was perfect! I really can't wait to read the next chapter, so please update soon!

SOO sorry it took me long to review, I've been out of town. Anyways, I LOVED this chapter! You are crazy about the trory action because I thought it was perfect! I really can't wait to read the next chapter, so please update soon!
1/29/2006 c2 readergurl87
nice
nice
1/27/2006 c1 GilmoreGirl411
O, I so think that you should make her walk right up to him,push summer out of the way, and then just start kissing him. Then, when they pull away, Summer's like "What the hell?" And Rory could say "What you have a problem with me kissing my boyfriend?" Then Summer's jaw would drop, and she could get all mad and storm off. By the time they get to their first class, the whole school would. Paris would find out by Louise and Madilyn in the hallway, and she like goes into a blind rage. She walks up to them and asks them and Tristan is afraid to say anything, but Rory just says Yes, we are. Then Paris just storms off. I dont know about anything after that. It's just when I read this, I thought of this. I'm good at coming up with ideas, but with writing, not so much. If you ever need any ideas, i can like totally hook you up with some. that is if you need any, Like if you ever get stuck. I just thought I would tell you, i understand if you dont use any of this. i just thought it up and wanted to tell you. good luck with your story, with or without this. :0)
O, I so think that you should make her walk right up to him,push summer out of the way, and then just start kissing him. Then, when they pull away, Summer's like "What the hell?" And Rory could say "What you have a problem with me kissing my boyfriend?" Then Summer's jaw would drop, and she could get all mad and storm off. By the time they get to their first class, the whole school would. Paris would find out by Louise and Madilyn in the hallway, and she like goes into a blind rage. She walks up to them and asks them and Tristan is afraid to say anything, but Rory just says Yes, we are. Then Paris just storms off. I dont know about anything after that. It's just when I read this, I thought of this. I'm good at coming up with ideas, but with writing, not so much. If you ever need any ideas, i can like totally hook you up with some. that is if you need any, Like if you ever get stuck. I just thought I would tell you, i understand if you dont use any of this. i just thought it up and wanted to tell you. good luck with your story, with or without this. :0)
1/27/2006 c2 CHELSEA
i love it! please update soon
i love it! please update soon
1/27/2006 c2
4tickle582
update really really soon!1 she has got to like just walk up and kiss him in front of everyone!1

update really really soon!1 she has got to like just walk up and kiss him in front of everyone!1
1/27/2006 c2
4Maeusle
I just love it! Really, georgeous job!
I love the way they got together as well as I love the Trory action. The car scene was so funny!

I just love it! Really, georgeous job!
I love the way they got together as well as I love the Trory action. The car scene was so funny!
1/27/2006 c2
1LoVe23
I loved this..I liked the flashback..I like how you got them together...I can't wait to read the next chapter..please update soon!

I loved this..I liked the flashback..I like how you got them together...I can't wait to read the next chapter..please update soon!