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11/28/2014 c10 Anissa
I love this story. I hope you continue writing this.
5/14/2014 c10 3WitchHunter Cross
Update! Update! I'm dying here! What was her decision!?
6/24/2010 c10 17ThexWhitexPhoenix
but why is it been so long since you updated? update now please!
9/10/2009 c10 lizzy
I wish you had updated. I really want to know what happens next.
8/31/2008 c10 Septimka-chan
Hi!

I must say, your ficcie is totally awesome. It's one of the best Chichiri/OC ficcies, that I've ever read- and I read a lot of those... =)

I'm very impressed by how much work you've put into this story. It is very well written, minus a few grammar mistakes, but who cares...? =))

Looks like you haven't updated in a while, but I beg you- please update! It's a wonderful story and deserves to be finished. Pretty please? *puppy eyes*

Have a nice day!

~Septimka-chan
12/27/2007 c10 slitherinprincess3
why havent you updayed it in so long, I want to read more of this, I really do. It is a great story and I want to know what happens next
12/26/2007 c7 slitherinprincess3
ok I have read the first few chapters of your story and I really love it, I know I read some of it before but never got past the fist few chapters before my computer died and i finally found it again so I am rereading the while thing.
10/13/2006 c10 6WaterGlyph
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW!
6/22/2006 c10 oiwqeuriouw
I really like this story so far, and even though you moved a little fast with the romance, I still thought it was good. I want to find out what Akina's planning, so update soon! ^_^
6/2/2006 c10 40TormentingAllLemmings
I'm reviewing, as promised! I decided to do it all in one shot. (Don't be offended by any criticism - I just can't word things very well on paper...)

To be honest, I didn't care much for it, but that's because I don't really like Tasuki/Miaka. The chapters were a little oddly-written, due to some punctuation and the whole thing being italicized or in bold.

I do think that you rushed their relationship a bit, but a lot of people seem to do that...I dunno, maybe it's just me? I think Akina is a bit of an MS as well, by her actions and the people surrounding her...the idea is interesting, but I think you don't do yourself justice in the way your wrote it. Not that's it bad - I've seen worse... - but I feel you could do more with the talent you have.

Sorry if I made you mad...it's hard expressing stuff on paper! If you want any specific help, feel free to message me. And if you're mad, I apologize...I try to be honest, even though my mom tells me "people don't want honesty, they want flattery". But - I want honesty from my reviewers, and so I try to be honest in my reviews.

TAL
3/17/2006 c10 P-TeL
You know what, i read this chapter and at the as same time listening to this music about NUriko: http:/members. at the last part, i nearly cried (I don't cry anymore...) if i had tears left with me. It was blending together so well! I loved it!
3/16/2006 c4 P-TeL
Argh! Why is it that Akina won't tell the others that she know the story?

Anywayz continue!
3/2/2006 c10 Amazing
I'm a huge chichiri fan, and this is an awesome fan fiction, it gets better with each chapter. I love the angsty situations, which are true to yuu watase's style. Please continue and finish this, I'm begging for a happy ending b/c I love chichiri more than I've loved any anime character in along time. His past is so sad he desreves a happy ending. Please continue to alter the story and re-create it in your image. I want a new story and I love a taski, miaka pairing. And the graceful attention you make sure to show other characters. But chichir and akina are no. 1
2/28/2006 c10 18Plutobaby494
Whats she going to do now? Please update soon!
2/28/2006 c10 The Masked Seishi
Eh..the whole story so far is so-so. There are a lot of grammatical mistakes, but I'm hardly an expert myself. I'm not a big fan of Mary Sue fics, which this one is turning into, but it is better than most I have seen.

One question though: why did Miaka betray Tamahome in the beginning? What did he do to deserve being treated like garbage by her, or was that just your way of furthering the plot?
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