12/17/2005 c7 theressomethingmissing
WHAT? Ok, that was a little too far there, but I suppose that it was better than all the other moments in the story to have it. But now Hermione will probably get pregnant and they'll probably get married! Ok then...anyway good work and keep updating!
WHAT? Ok, that was a little too far there, but I suppose that it was better than all the other moments in the story to have it. But now Hermione will probably get pregnant and they'll probably get married! Ok then...anyway good work and keep updating!
11/18/2005 c6 10bruisedpapaya
Pretty good, I'll keep reading if you keep updating.
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Pretty good, I'll keep reading if you keep updating.
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11/17/2005 c6 theressomethingmissing
That was really nice! I love the whole thing, especially the plot and everything. However, some of the scene/conversation changes are a bit confusing. Anyway, great work, and keep updating!
Also, it would be really great if you checked out my story, Hermione's Thoughts, because I only have 4 reviews. Thanks!
That was really nice! I love the whole thing, especially the plot and everything. However, some of the scene/conversation changes are a bit confusing. Anyway, great work, and keep updating!
Also, it would be really great if you checked out my story, Hermione's Thoughts, because I only have 4 reviews. Thanks!
11/13/2005 c4 2HermioneRox1357
This is really really good! I think the bits when Hermione is talking to Ginny and Ron is talking to Harry are brilliant. You've really managed to capture the thoughts of the two charecters. Good luck and keep writing!
This is really really good! I think the bits when Hermione is talking to Ginny and Ron is talking to Harry are brilliant. You've really managed to capture the thoughts of the two charecters. Good luck and keep writing!